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There are several factors needed to consider when it comes to setting up a new factory: the convenient of public transportation, the labor availability, and the local taxation.

However we tend to care only our profiting to ignore the unappealing but important problem - environmental protection.

Therefore, I am against the construction of this new factory if it would endanger the wild lives in the long run for three reasons: to set factory is not the only way to earn money, we should understand the effect of environmental destruction, and animals have their right to live on the area.

People always can develop many ways using the land to earn many. We can develop the tourism or cultivate croppers but animals only can rely on this land.

If environmental destruction causes the specific species disappear it would be possible effect food chain. Human are also the part of food chain, this change maybe endanger ourselves finally.

We do not have the authority to deprive of the right of animal to live. Every beings is equal on the earth ,and we should learn to respect every life.

還有一段結論還沒寫~可以的話,給我一點意見關於結論,謝謝!

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  • Kevin
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    您的文章寫得不錯, 只是仍然要盡量避免"中式英文".

    另外, 語意的邏輯上可以再加琢磨.

    There are several factors to consider when it comes to setting up a new factory, and among them are the convenience of public transportation, the availability of labor resources , and local taxation.

    However, we tend to care only about our profiting, ignoring the unappealing but important problem - environmental protection. Therefore, I am against the construction of such a factory for three reasons until this issue is taken care of .

    Setting up factories is not the only way to earn money. Unlike the wild lives that can only literally feed on the land, what we can do to profit from it includes developing tourism, cultivating crops, and many more. Why stick to the more harmful way?

    Moreover, we should be fully aware of the consequence of environmental destruction, which may include the extinction of certain species that is part of the food chain. In turn that will inevitably have some impact on us humans as a link of the chain.

    Yet another point rarely occurs to people is that animals have their right to live on Earth, and we are not entitled to deprive them of it . All beings are equal on Earth ,and we should learn to respect them.

    To make money is important, yet to preserve our planet is vital . Our environment is picking up speed deteriorating - mainly because of us humans excessively exploring it for our own good at the expense of other beings . Everyone of us now has our share to help slow down, if not reverse, the damage .

    There is only one Earth, and probably no second chance to save it!

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    IF YOU WANT TO set up a new factory, YOU HAVE TO consider several factors SUCH AS public transportation, LABOR RESOURCE, and local taxation.

    However ,YOU DEFINITELY FOCUS ON THE PROFIT INSTEAD OF PAYING ATTENTION to environment protection. therefore, I REJECT the construction of new factory if it would DAMAGE the wild life in the long run .my opnion is listed as below:

    to set UP A factory, YOU should NOT ONLY EVALUATE the effect of environmental destruction BUT ALSO GIVE THE right OF animals to live.

    People can USE many ways to earn money. We can promote the tourism or cultivate croppers.If environmental destruction makes many species disappear it would be possible to affect food chain. Human being are also a part of food chain, this change maybe endanger ourselves finally.We do not have the authority to deprive of the right of animal for living. Every animal is equal on the earth ,and we should learn to deal with every life.*****

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