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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文自傳幫我修改錯誤

My name is xxx. I am sixteen years old. I was born in Taipei . I think it is a suitable place for people to live. There are four people in my family. My father is a company's staff and my mother is the building cleaner. My older brother is a fast food restaurant staff and I am a student.

My personality is shy and optimistic. I always use an optimistic attitude to face anything. When I am facting a problem, I will not run away. If I evade it, it will not be sloved. Although I am shy, I like to make many friends. I can share my secrets to them.

I study in Hai-San Industrial Vocational High School Data Processing two grade. I have learned a lot of professional computer skills. So I can process the data by myself. Sometimes I can use the skills to help others. It can help my skills getting better.

After graduate, I want to study in department of Applied English. I started learning English since I was twelve years old. Before that, I did not have any experience in learning English. Since junior high school, I have been very interested in learning English. I think learning English can learn a lot of things. For example. I can learn great communication skills. It can improve my personality that I can talk to others easily.

In my spare time, I like to read some books and play badminton. Reading books can reinforce my language ability and learn a lot of knowledge. My favorite sport is badmintion. I like to play it because it can relax myself. I usually play it with my classmates. It is a lot of fun to play it. Every time I play badminton, I really enjoy it.

I am really interested in English. Studying in department of Applied English is my dream. If I have the chance to study in department of Applied English, I will do my best. I think I should prepare for professional subject because I do not want to miss the chance. I hope the dream will come ture.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    Wow! You are a great writer. I just have some suggestions.

    My name is xxx. I am sixteen years old. I was born in Taipe i. I think it is a suitable place for people to live. There are four people in my family. My father is a company’s staff and my mother is a janitor . My older brother is a fast- food restaurant staff and I am a student.

    My personality is shy and optimistic. I always use an optimistic attitude to deal with anything. When I encounter a problem, I will not run away. If I evade it, it will not be solved. Although I am shy, I like to make many friends. I can share my secrets with them.

    I have studied in Hai-San Industrial Vocational High School Data Processing for two years . I have learned a lot of professional computer skills, so I can process data by myself. Sometimes I can use the skills to help others. It can help my skills to get better.

    After graduate, I want to study in department of Applied English. I have started learning English since I was twelve years old. Before that, I did not have any experience in learning English. Since I was a junior high student , I have been very interested in learning English. By learning English, I can also learn many other things. For example, I can learn great communication skills and improve my personality. Moreover, I can talk to others easily.

    In my spare time, I like to read some books and play badminton. Reading books can reinforce my language ability and expand my knowledge. My favorite sport is badminton. I enjoy playing because it makes me feel relaxed. It is so much fun to play badminton with my classmates .

    I am really interested in English. Studying in department of Applied English is my dream. If I have the chance to study in department of Applied English, I will do my best. I think I should prepare for a professional subject because I do not want to miss the chance. I hope my dream will come true.

    參考資料: A Taiwanese living in the US
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  • 1 0 年前

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