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My New Year Resolution英文修正

My New Year Resolution

My new year hoped newly. First, I hope this semester I all disciplines to be able all pass. Then, I hoped that I could find the first work in the new year, best wage high spot. Because I want to go shopping, I did not hope that spends father and mother's money, therefore I thought that work. Third, the life work and rest might the normal spot, not probably look like arrives at previous day 12:00 am only then to go to sleep every night last year. Fourth, the substantial intelligence quotient and the health, hoped that a week can have two times is 30 minute movement time. Because to from comes to Gaoxiong, besides each week's physical education, in the movement, on body's muscle group nearly has not rested nearly. Finally, I want to work a money deposit part which does makes money, saves to can purchase a Ibanez electric guitar. Although this electric guitar brand is plays ROCK the musician comparison often to use, but I am want to obtain. The above these are my new year hoped newly.

大大:幫我看看

因為我英文不太好

能幫我看哪邊文法使用錯誤嗎?

很急~~~~~

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我的新年新希望。首先,我希望這一學期我所有的學科都能all pass.

接著,我希望我能在新的一年找到第一份工作,最好薪水高一點。

因為我想買東西,我不希望花爸媽的錢,所以我想自己打工。

第三,生活作息可以正常一點,不要像去年每天晚上都到隔天凌晨一兩點才入眠。

第四,充實智商和健康,希望一星期能有兩次長達30分鐘的運動時間。

因為至從來到高雄,除了每星期的體育課以外,幾乎沒在運動,身上的肌肉群幾乎都休息了。

最後,我想把打工賺來的錢存一部份起來,存到能購買一把Ibanez 電吉他。

雖然這個電吉他品牌是玩ROCK的樂手比較常使用,不過我就是想入手一把。

以上這些是我的新年新希望。

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我真的很急。

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  • 匿名使用者
    10 年前
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    我的新年新希望。

    My New Year's resolution.

    首先,我希望這一學期我所有的學科都能all pass.

    First of all, I hope I can pass all my courses this semester,

    接著,我希望我能在新的一年找到第一份工作,最好薪水高一點。

    afterwards, I hope I can find a good job with a high income.

    因為我想買東西,我不希望花爸媽的錢,所以我想自己打工。

    I want to buy a lot of things; however, I don't want to spend my parents' money, so I want to have a job.

    第三,生活作息可以正常一點,不要像去年每天晚上都到隔天凌晨一兩點才入眠。

    Thirdly, I would like to live in normalcy unlike my life last year where I was staying up late into the night.

    第四,充實智商和健康,希望一星期能有兩次長達30分鐘的運動時間。

    In fourth, I would like to be in shape, I hope to exercise twice a week for at least 30 minutes each session. I also hope to expand my knowledge.

    因為至從來到高雄,除了每星期的體育課以外,幾乎沒在運動,身上的肌肉群幾乎都休息了。

    Since I came from Koaohiung, I have hardly exercised except for my time in PE class. I find that my muscles are getting loose.

    最後,我想把打工賺來的錢存一部份起來,存到能購買一把Ibanez 電吉他。

    Lastly, I hope to save some money to buy an Ibanez electric guitar.

    雖然這個電吉他品牌是玩ROCK的樂手比較常使用,不過我就是想入手一把。

    Although this brand is mostly used by Rock stars, I would really like to have one even though I am just a beginner.

    以上這些是我的新年新希望。

    All of the above are my New Year's resolutions.

    參考資料: A Taiwanese living in the US
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