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This is a story about Amy and sixteen geese.

Amy moved to Canada with her father because her mother died in a car accident. She was unhappy. She wants her mother!

One day she found a nest of goose eggs, and there is no mother goose. She took them home, and put them into a cupboard and kept them warm. The baby geese saw Amy first when they born so they thought Amy is their mother. They fellow she everywhere.

Amy learned to fly a plane and taught the geese how to fly. The geese must fly south to States. Canada is too cold in winter. Amy and her father must show them the way to States and fly with them. It’s really difficult and dangerous, but she did it!

請幫我檢查一下文法並訂正,謝謝!!

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This is a story about Amy, her father, and sixteen geese.

Amy moved to Canada with her father, because her mother was died in a car accident. She was unhappy. She wants her mother!

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One day, she found a nest which filled up with goose eggs, and there was no mother goose, so she took them home and put them into a cupboard to keep them warm.

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After baby geese pop out of eggs, the first person they saw was Amy so they thought Amy was their mother. They followed her everywhere she went, so they thought Amy is their mother, so they followed her everywhere.

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Amy also had a new friend, Susan. She promised Amy nothing was going to happen to her geese. Susan took care of Amy just like a sister, she was older than Amy, and she could teach Amy many things. She was a really good friend.

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Amy learned how to fly a plane and taught the geese how to fly. The geese must fly south to the States because Canada is too cold in winter. Amy and her father must show them the way to the States and fly with them.

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When she arrived the marsh in States, 大家為他歡呼(請幫我翻成英文,謝謝! ).Amy was happy, too. She knew her father loved her very much, just like her mother!

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It is really difficult and dangerous, but she did it!

因為字數關係,分段貼上,加了一些內容,請再幫我看看,謝謝!

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  • Joyyy
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    10 年前
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    This is a story about Amy and sixteen geese.

    Amy moved to Canada with her father because her mother died in a car accident. She was unhappy. She wanted her mother!

    One day she found a nest of goose eggs, and there was no mother goose. She took them home, and put them into a cupboard to kept them warm. The baby geese saw Amy at first when they were born so they thought Amy was their mother. They followed her everywhere.

    Amy learned to fly a plane and taught the geese how to fly. The geese must flew south to States because Canada was too cold in winter. Amy and her father must showed them the way to States and flew with them. It was really difficult and dangerous, but she did it!

    幫你改了時態的錯誤,然後有些地方多加了字,這樣就比較順暢了!

    希望有幫上你的忙~:)

    參考資料:
  • 10 年前

    Amy moved to Canada with her father, because her mother was died in a car accident. She was unhappy. She wants her mother!

    One day, she found a nest which filled up with goose eggs, and there was no mother goose, so she took them home and put them into a cupboard to kept them warm. The baby geese saw Amy first when they were born, so they thought Amy is their mother, so they followed her everywhere.

    Amy learned how to fly a plane and taught the geese how to fly. The geese must fly south to the States because Canada is too cold in winter. Amy and her father must show them the way to the States and fly with them. It's really difficult and dangerous, but she did it!

    參考資料: 靜宜大學英文系學生我的腦袋
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