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[中譯英]如果我瘦下來…

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如果我瘦下來的話,

If I could lost weight,

挑衣服時可以有更多選擇。

There are many kinds of clothing that I could pick.

可以少受一點對我身材的嘲笑。

There are less unkind jokes on my shape.

就算我穿很多看起來也不會顯得臃腫。

It doesn't look so fat when I wear too much clothing.

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    如果我瘦下來的話,挑衣服時可以有更多選擇。

    If I could lose weight, there would be a lot more choices of clothing that I could pick from.

    可以少受一點對我身材的嘲笑。

    People would be less likely to tease me about my body shape.

    就算我穿很多看起來也不會顯得臃腫。

    And even if I'm wearing thick layers of clothing, I wouldn't look so bulky.

    http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/bulky

    2 someone who is bulky is big and heavy:

    圖片參考:http://www.ldoceonline.com/images/643/entry/pronse...

    Andrew is a bulky man.

    http://stanford.wellsphere.com/healthy-eating-arti...

    Women will get bulky if they lift weights?!?!

    http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Why_wearing_more_layers_...

    Why wearing more layers of clothing during winter keep us warmer than wearing just one thick piece of clothing?

    圖片參考:http://l.yimg.com/f/i/tw/ugc/rte/smiley_1.gif

    peace is always beautiful

  • 10 年前

    給您參考:

    如果我瘦下來的話,

    If I could lost weight,

    建議: If I slimmed down,

    挑衣服時可以有更多選擇。

    There are many kinds of clothing that I could pick.

    建議: I will have more choices in picking my dress;

    可以少受一點對我身材的嘲笑。

    There are less unkind jokes on my shape.

    建議: Suffer less mockery about my figure

    就算我穿很多看起來也不會顯得臃腫。

    It doesn't look so fat when I wear too much clothing.

    建議: Will not appear to be fat even with heavy dresses

    翻譯: If I slimmed down, I will have more choices in picking my dress, suffer less mockery, and not appear to be fat even with heavy clothes.

  • Audrey
    Lv 6
    10 年前

    如果我瘦下來的話,

    If I could lost weight,

    挑衣服時可以有更多選擇。

    There are many kinds of clothing that I could pick.

    可以少受一點對我身材的嘲笑。

    There are less unkind jokes on my shape.

    就算我穿很多看起來也不會顯得臃腫。

    It doesn't look so fat when I wear too much clothing.

    If I could lose some weight, I would have more choices of clothing to pick from, less ridicule from others of my figure, and not look pudgy even when I were to wear a lot.

    你的四句話是整體連串起來的,因此英文的寫法也應該是連串的,或至少以一個主詞”我”來寫四個句子。

    以下是分開句的寫法︰

    If I could lose some weight, there’d be more choices of clothing to pick from.

    I would get less ridicule of my figure from others.

    I wouldn’t look so pudgy even if I were to wear lots of clothes.

    參考資料: Audrey Lee
  • 10 年前

    如果我瘦下來的話,

    If I could lost weight,

    挑衣服時可以有更多選擇。

    I will be able to choose more varieties of clothing.

    可以少受一點對我身材的嘲笑。

    There will be less prejudice commends on my shape.

    就算我穿很多看起來也不會顯得臃腫。

    I won't look fat even when I wear lots of clothing.

    圖片參考:http://www.adiosbarbie.com/blog/wp-content/uploads...

    2010-02-17 01:28:49 補充:

    更正 第一句是If I could lose weight

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  • 10 年前

    If I could lose some weight,

    I would have more choices when buying clothes;

    I would also have less teases on my body from others.

    And even if I put on many clothes, I should never look fat.

    2010-02-17 01:26:29 補充:

    ......I should never look chubby.

    ( 最後一字fat, 可改為chubby)

    參考資料: my experience
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