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大陸高三的學生(持中國護照的喔),要申請香港大學,申請表中有一篇要求250字英文介紹,已經用英文寫好了,但是覺得有很多問題,請英文高手幫忙修改,內容依學校要求而撰,請保持文章原意。無限感恩! I was born in a financial family. Almost all my family work in banks or securities companies, so being influenced by what I do constantly see and hear. I use my allowance savings to buy 20 grams of gold as start of my... 顯示更多 大陸高三的學生(持中國護照的喔),要申請香港大學,申請表中有一篇要求250字英文介紹,已經用英文寫好了,但是覺得有很多問題,請英文高手幫忙修改,內容依學校要求而撰,請保持文章原意。無限感恩!

I was born in a financial family. Almost all my family work in banks or securities companies, so being influenced by what I do constantly see and hear. I use my allowance savings to buy 20 grams of gold as start of my investment life at my age of 12. In the recent years, I kept learning and practicing in stocks, funds, exchanges, gold, bonds, which was all in the range of my investment. Financial news online everyday and taught myself basic knowledge of economy is a part of my daily life. So I made up my mind to devote myself to study finance.

Hong Kong is the best fusion of Chinese and western cultures, international economy and finance center. The University of Hong Kong is a top-drawer university among the world. Studying in Hong Kong could both broaden my perspective and socialize and enculturate myself to step get into the real world.

I constantly try hard to surpass myself. I went aboard in almost every vacation since I entered middle school and as for now, I have traveled aboard alone to face all the difficulties by myself for 6 times. The happiest time was that I got the chance to being the Chinese agent of an English educational institution.

The more complicated the situation of world economy is, the more interested I am in it. In the future, I would like to strive constantly for self-improvement
as my nation-spirit is and I would like to help my country to become the world leader.
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