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大陸高三的學生(持中國護照的喔),要申請香港大學,申請表中有一篇要求250字英文介紹,已經用英文寫好了,但是覺得有很多問題,請英文高手幫忙修改,內容依學校要求而撰,請保持文章原意。無限感恩!

I was born in a financial family. Almost all my family work in banks or securities companies, so being influenced by what I do constantly see and hear. I use my allowance savings to buy 20 grams of gold as start of my investment life at my age of 12. In the recent years, I kept learning and practicing in stocks, funds, exchanges, gold, bonds, which was all in the range of my investment. Financial news online everyday and taught myself basic knowledge of economy is a part of my daily life. So I made up my mind to devote myself to study finance.

Hong Kong is the best fusion of Chinese and western cultures, international economy and finance center. The University of Hong Kong is a top-drawer university among the world. Studying in Hong Kong could both broaden my perspective and socialize and enculturate myself to step get into the real world.

I constantly try hard to surpass myself. I went aboard in almost every vacation since I entered middle school and as for now, I have traveled aboard alone to face all the difficulties by myself for 6 times. The happiest time was that I got the chance to being the Chinese agent of an English educational institution.

The more complicated the situation of world economy is, the more interested I am in it. In the future, I would like to strive constantly for self-improvement

as my nation-spirit is and I would like to help my country to become the world leader.

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  • hannah
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    1 0 年前
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    I was born in a financial family. Almost all my family work in banks or securities companies, so I have been influenced by what I saw and heard. I used my savings to buy 20 grams of gold as the start of my investment life at my age of 12. In the recent years, I kept learning and practicing in various investments including stocks, funds, exchanges, gold, bonds. Reading financial news online every day and acquiring basic knowledge of economy are a part of my daily life. So I’ve made up my mind to devote myself to studying finance.

    Hong Kong is the best place for intigration of Chinese and western cultures, international economy and financial center. The University of Hong Kong is a prestigious university in the world. Studying in Hong Kong could both broaden my perspective and socialization and help me to step into the real world.

    I constantly try hard to surpass myself. I went aboard during almost every vacation when I studied in middle school. So far, I have traveled aboard alone 6 times and solved all the difficulties by myself. The happiest thing was that I got the chance to be the Chinese representative of an English educational institution.

    The more complicated the situation of world economy is, the more interested I am in it. In the future, I would like to strive constantly for self-improvement and I would like to help my country to become the world leader.

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  • 東軒
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    1 0 年前

    大陸高三的學生(持中國護照的喔),要申請香港大學,申請表中有一篇要求250字英文介紹,已經用英文寫好了,但是覺得有很多問題,請英文高手幫忙修改,內容依學校要求而譔,請保持文章原意。無限感恩!

    我出生在一個財政家庭。 幾乎所有我家工作在銀行或证券公司中,因此被影響被什麼我經常看見並且聽見。我使用我的容限儲款買20克金子作為我的投資生活開始在我的年齡的12。在最近歲月,我在股票,資金,交換,金子,債券保留學習和實踐,是全部在我的投資範圍內。每天和教的在網上财务新闻經濟基础知识是我的日常生活的部分。 因此我下决心致力於研究財務。

    香港是中國和西部文化、國際經濟和財務中心的最佳的融合。 香港大學是在世界之中的一所最重要的大學。 學習在香港可能擴展我的透視,並且交往和跨步的enculturate进入现实世界。

    我經常设法超過自己。 我在幾乎每個假期进來登上,因為我上了中学和作為暫時,我登上單獨旅行由我自己面對所有困難6次。 最愉快的时间是我有機會是英國教育机构的中國代理。

    越複雜世界经济的情況的是,越感興趣我在它。 將來,我希望經常力争自我改善

    因為我的國家精神是,並且我希望帮助我的國家成為世界领导人。

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