自然發酵 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文文法檢查

I neither agree nor oppose regarding to the topic.

In my opinion, lovers could understand whether they are suitable for each other by

living together before married. Living together is a directly method to know about the

lifestyle, the personality, and the values are similar or not similar with each other,

even to know whether they are match on physical and spiritual. I think it is important

to many people. There are so many couples realized that they did not suit with each

other after they got married, and then, they divorce.

On the other hand, why another people oppose to this behavior, I think that they are

deeply affected by tradition; because the tradition think a woman who live with man

without getting married is lewd and sordid. So they agree about that.

自寫的破英文文章,怕文法和語意,或是其他單字用法不正確,可否請英文高手大大幫我檢查呢?

感激不盡~~

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  • 1 0 年前
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    I neither agree nor oppose regarding to the topic. (confusing)

    I do not agree or disagree about the topic

    In my opinion, lovers could understand more about each other by living together before getting married.

    Living together is a way to know if each other shares a similar lifestyle, personality and values, (-> this bit not necessary: and even to know whether they are match physically and spiritually.)

    I think it is important to many people. There are so many couples who realized that they are not in common in many aspects after they have got married, and then, they divorce.

    On the other hand, why another people oppose to this behavior, I think because that they are deeply affected by traditions; because the tradition holds that a woman who lives with a man without getting married is lewd and sordid. So they agree about that.

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