jason 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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嗨!大家好。

我的名字是JENNY

我很高興有這個機會向各位介紹VIP TOURS(旅行社)。

首先由我先介紹洛杉磯市區觀光和好萊塢。

再來換我來介紹 Grand Tour of Los Angeles.

以上所介紹的套裝行程 我希望大家會喜歡。

但如果你想要一個適合自己的私人旅遊行程。

沒問題。

貴賓旅遊也可以設計一個適合您的需要和時間安排的旅遊,。

不要客氣 , 請告訴我們何時何地你想要去的。

我們公司的服務將令你滿意!

Hi! everybody.

my name is Doreen and (杏如 : my name is Joyce)

It's my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce about VIP tours of California.

and I shall begin by introducing Los Angeles City Tour and Hollywood.

再來換我來介紹 Grand Tour of Los Angeles.

I hope everybody will like it.

but if you want to have a fit yourself of private tours.

No problem.

VIP Tours could design fit tour for your need and schedule.

Please Tell us where and when you want to go.

Our company will take you to Southern California's most fascinating attractions!

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hi! Dear all!

    My name is Jenny. I am very glad to have this opportunity introducing

    the VIP TOURS (a traveling agency). Firstly, please allow me to introduce the

    urban touring on Los Angels and Hollywood.

    Thereafter, I continue to introduce a touring course named The Grand

    Tour of Los Angeles. I hope everyone likes the aforesaid touring package

    service. However, if you want a touring

    course fitting to yourself, there will be no problem at all. We can also

    provide you with tailor-made VIP touring courses especially designed as you

    request and arrange. Please feel free to

    contact us and detail when and where about your touring plans. Our service will

    certainly satisfy you!

  • 1 0 年前

    我認為應該是:

    Hi! Hello, everyone.

    My name is JENNY

    I am very pleased to have this opportunity to introduce the VIP TOURS (travel agents).

    First of all I will give an introduction on the Los Angeles City Tour and Hollywood.

    Come for me to introduce the Grand Tour of Los Angeles.

    The above package tour, I hope you will like it.

    But if you want one for their own private tours.

    No problem.

    VIP Tours can also be designed to fit your needs and a schedule of travel.

    Do not mention it, please let us know when and where you want to go.

    Our company's service will satisfy you!

    Hi! Everybody.

    my name is Doreen and (apricots, such as: my name is Joyce)

    It's my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce about VIP tours of California.

    and I shall begin by introducing Los Angeles City Tour and Hollywood.

    Come for me to introduce the Grand Tour of Los Angeles.

    I hope everybody will like it.

    but if you want to have a fit yourself of private tours.

    No problem.

    VIP Tours could design fit tour for your need and schedule.

    Please Tell us where and when you want to go.

    Our company will take you to Southern California's most fascinating attractions!

    希望對你有幫助~ :)

    參考資料: google翻譯
  • 1 0 年前

    Hi! everybody.

    my name is Doreen and (杏如 : my name is Joyce)

    It's my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce you about the VIP tours of California.

    and I will begin by introducing you the glamorous Los Angeles City and Hollywood.

    then, it we'll go on the Grand Tour of Los Angeles.

    I hope everybody will like it.

    and if you want to have a costumized tour that's no problem too!

    our VIP Tours are designed to fit your needs and schedule.

    Please Tell us where and when you want to go.

    Our company will take you to Southern California's most fascinating attractions!

    改了一些小地方~

    參考資料: myself
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