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There is an example can explain strength and weakness of system in this department. A customer from overseas travel to Taiwan, but the hotel has fully book and one of reservation staff told him, there is no room available because it is fully book in this hotel; The customer said before he came to Taiwan he already booked from online and why he couldn’t get a room from now on. So the staff calls front office manager to deal with this customer. The manager make sure not make customer unhappy, so still give a room for customer with apologize and a free breakfast, that make customer happy. If staff been a good training and good knowledge of system also be professional, that will attract lot of customer to come and it’s really builds the hotel image and prestige by the staff, so this is strength for the system, from the other side if staff don’t have knowledge of system and not be professional, this happens will affect the hotel and make business closing down to end.

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