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MY FAVORITE MOVIE
My favorite movie is Bruce Aimighty.It is a story about an announcer whose name is Bruce.He always blames God for everything that gose wrong and think that God
doesn't do his work,so the world become worse and worse.
One day,God appears suddenly and challenges Bruce to take on his job,manage
the world.However,when Bruce becomes God,he acts on his own will and causes
the world disturbance.In the end ,he suddenly realizes that being God isn't a easy
work to do,so he decides to return the normal life.Although he's still a humble
person,now he is glad to be himself.He treats people sincerely instead of
complaining.
In this movie,Bruce is my favorite character,not only beacause he is a protagonist
but also beacause his exquisite performance.
Sometimes, we may complain ''God.it is unfair''but,in fact ,God is always standing
by us,doing many things for us that we don't detect.After watching this movie.I learn that if we cooperate with everyone ,then there will be harmony in our mind.If we will
to contribute to our community ,then there will be a harmony world.
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