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MY FAVORITE MOVIE

My favorite movie is Bruce Aimighty.It is a story about an announcer whose name is Bruce.He always blames God for everything that gose wrong and think that God

doesn't do his work,so the world become worse and worse.

One day,God appears suddenly and challenges Bruce to take on his job,manage

the world.However,when Bruce becomes God,he acts on his own will and causes

the world disturbance.In the end ,he suddenly realizes that being God isn't a easy

work to do,so he decides to return the normal life.Although he's still a humble

person,now he is glad to be himself.He treats people sincerely instead of

complaining.

In this movie,Bruce is my favorite character,not only beacause he is a protagonist

but also beacause his exquisite performance.

Sometimes, we may complain ''God.it is unfair''but,in fact ,God is always standing

by us,doing many things for us that we don't detect.After watching this movie.I learn that if we cooperate with everyone ,then there will be harmony in our mind.If we will

to contribute to our community ,then there will be a harmony world.

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  • Jamin
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    10 年前
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    MY FAVORITE MOVIE

    My favorite movie is Bruce Almighty. It is a story about a newscaster by the name of Bruce. He always blames God for everything that goes wrong in his life and thinks that God is not doing his work. And because of that, the world is becoming worse.

    One day, God appears suddenly and challenges Bruce to take over his job of managing the world. However, when Bruce attains the abilities of God, he acts in his own accord and causes chaos in his hometown. In the end, he realizes that being God is not an easy job. He then decides to return to his normal life. Although he is now a mere human, he is glad to be himself. He treats people sincerely instead of complaining.

    In this movie, Bruce is my favorite character, not only because he is a protagonist but also because of his exquisite performance. Sometimes, we may complain to God that things are unfair, but in fact, God is always standing by us, doing many things for us without us knowing. After watching this movie, I learn that if we cooperate with everyone, there will be harmony. And if we contribute to our community, then the world would be a harmonious one.

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