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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請求英文/文法高手幫幫我!

你好,我有一篇英文寫作需要訂正,以下放在 = XXX = 裡面的,是我被老師圈起來文法錯誤的地方(共12個地方),麻煩高手幫幫我拜託。那些被圈起來的老師說都要改成過去式,但是我查過字典已經是過去式了啊! 拜託幫幫我了,謝謝˙ˇ˙

I will never forget the day Iwent to the first singing and dance show in my life.

That day, I woke up early to = went = there by bus. My cousin with me took the bus from Tainan to Taipei. = It's spent = almost five hours. When I arrived the

Taipei area, Ibegan to = bought = many products and met another fans there.

I was so happy because I could finally = met = my favorite idol. At 2 pm, we

= start = form a line to get in the show. Finally, we = get = into the building and

saw our favorite idol. We were so excited and = wanna = cried. The show only

= spent = three hours, but to us = it's = not enough. We = wanna = more and

= wanna saw = again. That day, was my happy and unforgetable moment in my

life and I have always = remember = it.

麻煩高手幫我一下囉!謝謝了˙ˇ˙

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    I will never forget the day I went to the first singing and dance show in my life.

    That day, I woke up early to = go = there by bus.

    My cousin with me took the bus from Tainan to Taipei.

    = It took us = almost five hours. When I arrived in Taipei,

    I began to = buy = many products and met other fans there.

    I was so happy because I could finally = meet = my favorite idol.

    At 2 pm, we = started = form a line to get in the show.

    Finally, we = got = into the building and saw our favorite idol.

    We were so excited and nearly going to cry. The show only

    = lasted for= three hours, but to us = it was = not enough.

    We = wanted = more and= hoped to see it= again.

    That day was my happy and unforgettable moment in my life and I have always = remembered = it.

    改過後是這樣,另外中間還有些用字不適當也順便替你改了

    加油!!!

    2010-04-05 23:33:01 補充:

    上面那位"秀",文法錯的有些太誇張了,"It was spent"是什麼句子?

    請多多加油喔!

    參考資料: 個人, 個人
  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    I will never forget the day Iwent to the first singing and dance show in my life.

    That day, I woke up early to = go = there by bus. My cousin with me took the bus from Tainan to Taipei. = It was spent = almost five hours. When I arrived the

    Taipei area, I began to = buy= many products and met another fans there.

    I was so happy because I could finally = meet = my favorite idol. At 2 pm, we

    = started = form a line to get in the show. Finally, we = got = into the building and

    saw our favorite idol. We were so excited and = wanted to = cried. The show only

    = was spent = three hours, but to us = it was= not enough. We =wanted = more and

    = wanted to see = again. That day, was my happy and unforgetable moment in my

    life and I have always = remembered = it.

    2010-04-06 02:06:45 補充:

    前一句: My cousin with me took the bus from Tainan to Taipei. 後一句可接:

    Taking bus from Tainan to Taipei was spent almost five hours

    (We spent almost five hours taking bus from Tainan to Taipei的被動式)

    Taking bus from Tainan to Taipei前面提過,由it代替= it was spent almost five hours

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