J. N. Z. 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

英文達人請幫我改一下文法~~~ 3q3q

Yoga can improve health of the body because it through the postures, breathing exercise of yoga to release mental and emotional tension.

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  • 10 年前
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    Yoga can improve health of the body (“健康”再加body1字,似多餘,且後句已表明不只身體,還有精神方面的健康)because it releases mental and emotional tensions through the postures, breathing exercise of yoga to release mental and emotional tension. (it through……,through 是介系詞,其前應有動詞如go,獨立使用,是不正確的寫法)

    Yoga can improve health because it releases mental and emotional tensions through postures, breathing exercise.

  • nung
    Lv 7
    10 年前

    The yoga postures could enhance body flexibility and improve health; the exercise of yoga breathing could also help releasing mental and emotional tension.

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