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英文高手請幫我看看英文信這樣寫可以嗎

英文高手請幫忙修改一下 謝謝

Dear Sirs,

We are happy to advise you that we have recently developed a new computer keyboard. That is selling like hot cakes in the U.S.A.

We offer the best quality goods, incorporating the latest engineering techniques and our second to none design and function, the new products which made a great sensation at this year’s International Trade Fair. We confidently believe that you can rely on us quite satisfactorily. Enclosed is the catalogue showing our full range of computer keyboard.

If you agree, we would be glad to supply you with samples. We look forward to serving you. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thanks in advance.

Yours faithfully,

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Dear Sirs,

    We are pleased to inform you that we have recently developed a new computer keyboard that is selling like hot cakes in the U.S.A.

    We supply goods of the best quality, incorporating the latest engineering techniques and our second-to-none design and functions, especially the above-mentioned new product which attracted great attention at this year’s International Trade Fair. We confidently believe that you can rely on us for establishing mutually beneficial relationship. Enclosed is a catalogue showing our full range of computer keyboards.

    If you are interested, we would be glad to provide you with samples. We look forward to serving you. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact us. Thanks in advance.

    Best regards,

    Xxxx Xxx

    2010-04-17 15:56:15 補充:

    我儘量保持您原有的風格與語意, 但對於一些較拗口的用字加以調整, 所有刪改語句都有其原因 如果您有任何不明白, 請補充發問.

    2010-04-17 15:58:37 補充:

    Yours faithfully並不奇怪, 是很制式的郵寄書信寫法. 現在的emails多用Best regards就可以了.

    參考資料: 國際貿易專業經驗
  • 1 0 年前

    我覺得你寫的已經很好了,只是有些小地方不夠自然。我就直接把我想改的,重新打一次,你請注意一下,包括單複數或大小寫。但我要重申,你原本寫的已經非常好了,直接寄出去也不會有問題的。

    Dear sir,

    I am excited to show you that we have developed recently a new (line of) computer keyboard. It is selling like hot cakes in the US.

    Our products have the highest quality, incorporating the latest technology, and featuring our second to none design and functionality. The new products caused a great sensation at the International Trade Fair this year. We are confident that you can reply on us. Enclosed is the catalogue showing you our full range of computer keyboards.

    If you are interested, we'd be more than happy to send you some samples. I am looking forward to working with you. ..............(the rest is good.)

    best regards, (用faithfully很奇怪)

    我在美國常寫這種信,所以比較知道大家習慣的寫法。還有,就是你把你們公司的產品講得頗有吸引力的,介意私下跟我講是哪個牌子的嗎?謝謝。

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