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Travel To Yilan County

Hello! Everybody. I am John. Today I introduce travel to Yilan county. First, I introduce Yilan county Jiaosi. What is Jiaosi? Jiaosi means Yilan county’s place. This place are some hotspring. So I and my girlfriend went to Jiaosi hotspring on last summer vacation, but my girlfriend stomachache. She took some picture about me. Oh! I think this picture special, because I don’t know fish can foot massage. Ha! It’s really special experience. When we felt tired, we went to hotspring stone bed took a rest. I felt comfortable , because the stone bed’s under are hotspring. This is hotspring noodles. It’s very delicious, because this soup have made hotspring. Um~~ very sweet! After we went to Yilan. Why we went to Yilan? We looked for my best friend, but he was sleep. Ha! Ha! It’s secret. Then we went to night market. We ate famous refreshments. First, we ate 三星卜肉. It made up Yilan Onion and pork. Then we ate 包心粉圓. It made up 粉圓 and red beans. A 粉圓 inside red beans. Next day, we went to Luodong sport national park. 我們覺得那裏空氣清新,景色優美. 鵝與鴨也完全不怕人,感覺置生在童話中,最後我們拍了幾張照做紀念,卻越看越像是在外國的感覺,宜蘭的旅行真是豐富好玩.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    幫你修正文法了

    Travelling To the city of Yilan

    Hello! Everybody. I am John. Today, I will be introducing my experience of

    travelling to city of Yilan. Firstly, I will like to introduce Jiaosi. Where is Jiaosi?

    Jiaosi is a place in the city of Yilan. This place is well known for its hotsprings.

    Therefore, my girlfriend and I went to enjoy Jiaosi's hotsprings during last

    summer vacation.However,my girlfriend got a stomachache. She took some

    pictures of me. Oh! I think those pictures were special, because I did not know

    that fish could do foot massage for us. Ha! It was really a special experience.

    When we felt tired, we went to the hotspring stone bed to take a rest. I felt

    comfortable because of the hotsprings which was under the stone bed. This is

    hotspring noodles. It was very delicious because this soup was made of the

    water in the hotsprings. Um~~ very sweet! After we went to Yilan.

    Why did we go to Yilan? We looked for my best friend, but he was asleep. Ha! Ha! It was a secret. Then, we went to the night market. We ate famous

    refreshments. Firstly, we ate 三星卜肉. It is made up of Yilan Onion and pork.

    Then, we ate 包心粉圓. It is made up of 粉圓 and red

    beans. A 粉圓 contains red beans. Next day, we went to the Luodong sports

    national park.

    我們覺得那裏空氣清新,景色優美. 鵝與鴨也完全不怕人,感覺置生在童話中,最後我們拍了幾張照做紀念,卻越看越像是在外國的感覺,宜蘭的旅行真是豐富好玩.I felt that the air there was fresh, the scenery was beautiful

    and picturesque. The swans and ducks were not afraid of people at all, it made

    us feel as if we were in a fairytale. Finally, we took some photos to cherish

    those unforgettable memories and the sceneries in the pictures looked like we

    had travelled overseas.This trip was really enriching and fun-pack.

    希望能合你意!

    2010-04-19 16:09:05 補充:

    最後一句是This trip was really enriching and fun-packed.

    不是This trip was really enriching and fun-pack.

    抱歉!

    參考資料: me, no 翻譯網, me
  • 6 年前

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  • 1 0 年前

    We thought there air is fresh, the scenery is exquisite. The goose and the duck completely are not also shy, felt sets lives in the fairy tale, finally we patted several according to make the commemoration, more looked actually was likely in the foreign feeling, Yilan's travel really is rich amusing.

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