茹蓉 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幾句有點文法錯誤,請大家幫我^^感激不盡

這是要演說用的,但有些文法錯誤,想請大家幫我修改一下,希望大家幫我改得流暢一點,謝謝大家喔^^

在我唸中學時,我的父母希望我能考護校, 但是我對護士這行業並不感興趣

但是說真的,我現在有點後悔, 因為我放棄了一個穩定的工作。

而我也已經成年了,我想也該為自己的人生負責。

畢業後,我希望自己可以找到不錯的工作然後買一台車。

中年後,希望有一間屬於自己的房子,也有一些積蓄

老年後,希望自己能環遊世界,過個無憂無慮的生活

(這樣也就滿足了---->這句我不會寫,請大家幫我^^)

In my middle school, my parents wanted me to test nursing school, but I was not interested in the trade of nurses. But really, I am a little regret, because I gave up a steady job.

And I have grown up; I would like to have the responsibility for my life.

After graduation, I hope I can find the ideal job and then buy a car.

Middle-aged, I hope have a house of my own, and some savings.

Old age, I hope to be able to travel around the world, have a carefree life.

這樣也就滿足了

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    When I was in middle school, my parents wanted me to goto nursing school, but I was not interested in having nursing as a career at all. But now, I am regretting it a little, because I gave up a steady job. Besides, I am a grown up, so, I have to take responsibility for my actions. I hope that I will be able to find an ideal job and buy a car after graduation. Then, I wish I will be able to buy a house and have some savings. When I turn old and gray, I wish I will be able to travel around the world and live a carefree life. By then, I will be fully satisfied.

    2010-04-26 12:00:45 補充:

    err..he's right you know..<.<

    it's preschool --> elementary school --> middle school --> high school --> university/college!

    2010-04-26 12:02:40 補充:

    beside..how would you translate it otherwise?

    geez..get your facts straight before laughing at other people..>.>

    i think thats very rude of you to do that..=@

    參考資料: 我是個從小就在加拿大長大的台灣人!~=)
  • leo
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    中學 middle school ?? 哈哈..那小學就是 small school, 大學就是 big school 啦!!

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