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匿名使用者 發問時間: 教育與參考考試 · 10 年前

急~幫我看看我的英文自傳

I’m AAA, born in 1990, an inconspicuous house, located in AAA County, witness to my growth.

When I was an elementary school student, I was selected a model student. When I was graduated from elementary, I got a schoolmaster’s prize. It let me confirm myself-expression. While I was junior and senior high student, I also have been a Counsellor ,Arts Chief and so on. These experience, not only can helping people, training interpersonal relationship and my attitude, but also let me grow up very much. And in the MCU, because of interested in learning language, I joined the English Reading Club. By the way of reading English short story, I realize that learning language not only limited to class, but also get delight in English short story. I’m impressed none other than the time that I Running News at MCU’s anniversary. I was a reporter, but owing to the prepare in advance and team work. It let our team get the first prize.

When I was a child, I was full of curiosity. I like to try all kinds of new things and I like interaction with people, so I think the team work is very important. Through communication and coordination, the result often more complete than one person’s thinking and plan. And after freshman and sophomore’s learning, searching, including the Advertising and Public Relation’s plan writing or activity’s plan, they let me grow up and let me determine my future.

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    第二段的第四行

    These experience, not only can helping people,

    can後方的helping 應改為help

    其他的看起來應該是沒什麼問題。

    看得出來板大的英文也有一定的實力呢。

    預祝,成功。

    BY雪藤

  • 10 年前

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