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My family uniqueness

Today I want to introduce my grandmother as today's topic. My grandmother born on 1930s in a rich family in 嘉義, however her family abandon her due to some superstitions. In the same time, my great grandfather walked by the brought my grandma home. In fact, my great grandfather's family was quite poor that time and they even didn't have enough to buy food. What's worse, they even had to borrowed money from other to buy food, and they just couldn't pay off. So my grandmother wasn't easy for her. At her age 13, my grandpa went out for work. However, the salary was far enough for the family's debt and spending. Therefore, my grandmother went salt factory nearby to work; she was too little to afford this work and found by security. And the security said "you are too little to afford this work, just go back home". Because the job required adult labor not child. Nevertheless, she had to went anywhere to find job, my great grandfather was sick and they didn't have money to buy food. Despite of hardship, she still found job ,but it wasn't stable. So she had to change usually. Just one year later, my great grandfather passed away. And few year later, my grandfather and grandma got married. And they have 4 children. Whereas the family still needed money, it was an very hard time for them.

At her age 38,my great grandmother passed away, and she felt very sad but she didn't have enough money to prepare my great grandmother's funeral. So she had to borrow, and it made family owned much debt than even. To pay the large amount of debt she took her 4 children to Taipei to find job. It was also a turning point for her life. 拜託!拜託!我這禮拜四要上台報告,師說報告時間要超過三分鐘但小於四分鐘。請大家拯救我吧!!

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As soon as she step into Taipei, she told to herself that she had be strong and don't let other look down on her and her family. In order to accomplish this goal, she worked vary hard and she even had three jobs in the same time!

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While the speed of earning money was to slow for her, she join group like small bank. When a group member need money, then he can ask other group member to lend them and he also had to pay interest to them. The interest was higher than real bank but the risk was higher too.

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It was often heard that people borrow money and they just run away. Though it has high risk, she still used it to help her to paid off all the debt and she even buy three houses. By knowing this story, I realize that "just go to get it and your destiny is mastered by yourself".

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    My family uniqueness

    Today I want to introduce my grandmother as today's topic. My grandmother born on 1930s in a rich family in 嘉義 1930s, however her family abandoned her due to some superstitions. In at the same time, my great grandfather walked by the and brought my grandma home. In fact, my great grandfather's family was quite poor that time and they even didn't have enough money to buy food. What's worse, they even had to borrowed money from other to buy food, and they just couldn't pay off back.

    So my grandmother wasn't didn’t have an easy for her life, at her age 13, my grandfather (前後用詞一致)went out for work. However, the salary was far from enough for the family's debt and spending. Therefore, my grandmother went salt factory nearby to work; but she was too little to afford this work and found by security, and the security said "you are too little to afford for this work, just go back home", because the job required adult labor not child.

    Nevertheless, she had to went go anywhere to find a job, my great grandfather was sick and they didn't have money to buy their money wasn’t enough for food. Despite of the hardship, she still found a job finally, but it wasn't stable, so she had to change it usually often, Just one year later, my great grandfather passed away, and after few years later, my grandfather and grandmother(用詞應一致) got married, And they have had 4 children, whereas, the family still needed lacked money, it was an a very hard time for them.

    At When her age 38, my great grandmother passed away too, and she felt very sad but she didn't have enough money and couldn’t afford to prepare my great grandmother's funeral, so she had to borrowed, and it that made her family owned owed much debt than even. To In order to pay the large amount of debt, she took her 4 children with her to Taipei to find job, It which was also a turning point for her life.

    2010-04-20 11:06:13 補充:

    As soon as she step into Taipei, she told herself that she had to be strong and never let other people look down on her and her family, for accomplishing this goal, she worked very hard and even had three jobs at the same time.

    2010-04-20 11:06:53 補充:

    While the speed of earning money was too slow for her, she joined a group that like a small bank, when a group member needed money, then he could ask other member to lend him and he had to pay back the loan plus

    2010-04-20 11:07:14 補充:

    interests to them. The interests were higher than the requirements of a real bank but the risk was higher too.

    It was often heard that people borrow money and then run away, although it

    2010-04-20 11:07:29 補充:

    has high risk, she still used it to help her to paid off all the debt and she even bought three houses, from this story, I realize that "just go and do it and your destiny will be mastered by yourself"

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