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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文會員證書

請英文高手幫我審核一下

幫我確認英文應用文書寫方式有無錯誤

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Certificate of Membership

Taipei Osteopathy Academy, Taipei City, Taiwan, R.O.C.

Mr. /Ms. : Wang Hsiao-Ming Date of Birth: 12.25.2000

The individual name above has full filled the qualification as a member, under the evaluation in accordance with the provisions of this academy. Be member of TOA.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    "匿名" 你好,

    建議修正部分如下,

    Mr. /Ms. : Wang Hsiao-Ming (1) Date of Birth: 12.25.2000 (2)

    The individual name (3) above has full filled (4) the qualification as a member, under the evaluation in accordance with the provisions of this academy. Be member of TOA. (5)

    (1). 英文名字是用(名 + 姓), 或是 (姓, 名) 表示 :

    "Hsiao-Ming Wang" or "Wang, Hsiao-Ming"

    (2). 建議日期較正式不被誤會的寫法(妳寫的其實也沒錯) :

    December 25 2000

    (3). name ==> named

    (4). full filled ==> fulfilled(達到, 符合...我猜是 typo?)

    (5). 建議修改為 : "to be a TOA member" or " to be a member of TOA"

    整個句子為 ==>

    The individual named above has fulfilled the qualification to a member of TOA under the evaluation in accordance with the provisions of this academy.

    參考資料: me and hope to help you a little!
  • 1 0 年前

    大體上Ok, 有幾個小錯誤:

    1. The individual "named" above

    2. "fulfilled" -> 一個字哦

    3. "qualification" 我會建議加s, 因為你們的 qualification 應該不只一樣吧?

    4. 最後一局無主詞, 你是要說誰be a member of TOA?

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