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ch3oh 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫忙修改一下我的英文

1.紅色衣服布料材質延展性比較好 很柔軟 和我們公司的布料較相似

The ducility of the material of the red clothes is better and its touch is

soft,which is smiliar to our company.

2.白色衣服布料材質延展性比較不好 很粗糙 很硬

The ducility of the material of the white clothes is and its touch is rouch

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  • winwin
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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. 紅色衣服布料材質延展性比較好 很柔軟 和我們公司的布料較相似

    The ducility of the material of the red clothes is better and its touch is

    soft,which is smiliar to our company.

    ** 更改 :

    Version (1) The material in red is soft and it has good ductility. It has similar feature as the fabric quality from our company

    Version (2) The material in red has soft hand feel and it has good ductility. It has similar characteristic as the fabric quality from our company.

    2.白色衣服布料材質延展性比較不好 很粗糙 很硬

    The ducility of the material of the white clothes is and its touch is rouch

    ** 更改 :

    Version (1) The material in white is not good in ductility, as it is too coarse and stiff.

    Version (2) The material in white is bad in ductility, as it is too coarse and stiff.

    可簡單點, 把兩句加在一起, 成為一組完整句 :

    The fabric in red colour has better ductility and softer hand feel than the white one, while the white cloth is too coarse and stiff. Comparatively, it is more suitable to use this red cloth, as it has similar characteristic as the fabric quality from our company.

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