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Brock Lenser 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看這些英文哪些有錯 需要更改的?

How do you find capital to plan an event ????

Here is five ways to find capital.

1.Registration fees: When people want to enter the a meeting place, they have to pay the registration fees.

2.The stalls rental: These fees are paid by enterprise.

3. Commercial income: commercial income comes from the international network, propaganda signboards and magazines.

4. Sponsors income: Some people or enterprises are interested in this show, they can donate capitals to the show.

5.Sundries income: For example: Donate, special charity bazaar are include in sundries income.

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對 我是要寫雜項收入

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    你好,

    【標題】

    版主是要表達「如何為活動計畫集資」嗎?

    集資:Raise funds;Fund raising;Pool funds from different resources。

    整句:How to Make a Plan for Event Fund Raising. Making An Event Fund Raising Plan. Plans for Event Pool resourcing.

    【內容】

    1. 入場費:Admission、Entrance Fee。

    2. 攤位:Vendor Unit;Shop-House Unit 。攤位租金收入:Leasing Revenue for Vendor Units。

    3. 廣告收入:Advertising Revenue (Income)。

    4. Sponsorship。(其實在舉辦大型活動時「廣告」與「贊助」是同一類型的收入)

    5. 雜項:Miscellaneous。捐助、義賣全部用一個字即可:Charity(既是「雜項」應有很多種類,版主只舉出一種) ;雜項收入:Miscellaneous Income。

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  • 1 0 年前

    看不懂第五點是什麼意思 "sundries income"?? 解說的英文也是錯誤一堆,

    你是指 "雜項收入"嗎? 如果是的話, 好像不應該這麼寫才對

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  • 1 0 年前

    How do you find capital to plan an event ? (正式文章不能像平常打字這樣那麼多問號)

    Here are five ways to find capital. (five ways 是複數要用 are )

    1.Registration fees: When people want to enter the meeting place, they have to pay the registration fees. (the 和 a 不可放在一起,擇一的話我選 the )

    2.The stalls rental: These fees are paid by enterprise.

    3.Commercial income: Commercial income comes from the international network, propaganda signboards and magazines. (開頭 C 要大寫)

    4.Sponsors income: Some people or enterprises are interested in the show, they can donate capitals to the show.

    5.Sundries income: For example: Donate, especially charity bazaar are include in sundries income. ( especially 是"特別是"的意思, special只是代表"特別", 所以我覺得用 especially 比較適合)

    以上是我個人做的修正,或許有更厲害的高手給予指正,僅供參考,希望對你有幫助喔:)

    參考資料: yahoo奇摩字典
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