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喻涵 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文句子修正

 

 

麻煩幫我看看有沒有文法用錯

時態、句子、標點符號不對的地方

有的話請幫我修正

或者幫我改成更好的句子 , 謝謝 .

急需 今天要用 回答好的話給20點

Dear Mom :

Thanks for your take care with no complain. (謝謝妳無怨言的照顧)

When I was in danger , you most appear. (當我在危險時妳總出現)

While I was sick , you always to string along with me. (當我生病時妳總伴在我身旁)

In fact I don't want to grow up , I want to be your child forever.

(事實上我不想長大,我想永遠做妳的孩子)

I know sometimes I let you angry and worry. (我知道有時我讓妳生氣憂慮)

I am apologetic. (我很抱歉)

Please forgive me. (請原諒我)

You are just like an angel full of my life. (妳像是天使充滿我的生命)

You are kind. (妳很慈祥)

And you are important to me. (妳對我而言很重要)

I will take care of myself.  (我將會好好照顧自己)

So please keep your health. (所以請妳保持健康)

Your health make me most happy. (妳的健康使我最高興)

You are everything I need.  (妳是一切我所需要的)

Happy Mother's day !

 

 

 

 

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    英文句子修正

    意思寫得不錯,祇有少量用詞和文法要修改的(例如時式用現在式。)

    你的母親必定喜歡讀你的英文信哩!

    Dear Mom,

    Thanks for your care with no

    complaint. (謝謝妳無怨言的照顧)

    When I am in danger , you always

    appear. (當我在危險時妳總出現)

    While I am sick , you always stay beside me. (當我生病時妳總伴在我身旁)

    In fact I don't want to grow up , I

    want to be your little child forever.

    (事實上我不想長大,我想永遠做妳的孩子)

    I know

    sometimes I make you angry and worry. (我知道有時我讓妳生氣憂慮)

    I am sorry. (我很抱歉)

    Please forgive me. (請原諒我)

    You are just

    like an angel in my whole life. (妳像是天使充滿我的生命)

    You are kind. (妳很慈祥)

    And

    you are very important to me. (妳對我而言很重要)

    I will look after myself well.

     (我將會好好照顧自己)

    So please keep yourself healthy. (所以請妳保持健康)

    A healthy you makes me happy most . (妳的健康使我最高興)

    You are everything I need.

     (妳是一切我所需要的)

    Happy Mother's day !

     

     

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  • 1.Thanks for your take care with no complain.

    (感謝您的照顧,沒有抱怨。)

    2.When I was in danger , you most appear.

    (當我處於危險之中,你似乎多數。)

    3.While I was sick , you always to string along with me.

    (雖然我病了,你總是和我一起為字符串。)

    4.In fact I don't want to grow up , I want to be your child forever.

    (其實我不想長大,我想成為你的孩子永遠。)

    5.I know sometimes I let you angry and worry.

    (我知道,有時我讓你憤怒和憂慮。)

    6.I am apologetic.

    (我很抱歉。)

    7.Please forgive me.

    (請原諒我。)

    8.You are just like an angel full of my life.

    (你是一個天使一樣充滿了我的生活。)

    9.You are kind.

    (你是友善的。)

    10.And you are important to me.

    (而你對我很重要。)

    11.I will take care of myself.

    (我會照顧自己。)

    12.So please keep your health.

    (所以,請保持您的健康。)

    13.Your health make me most happy.

    (您的健康讓我最高興。)

    14.You are everything I need.

    (你是我需要的一切)

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  • 1 0 年前

    In fact I don't want to grow up , I want to be your child forever.

    (事實上我不想長大,我想永遠做妳的孩子)

    這個沒關係吧?就算你長大,你一樣是媽媽的孩子

    你這樣說就好像長大後就不能做媽媽的孩子,

    語意有點怪,以中文來講得話...

    2010-05-09 06:45:25 補充:

    You are everything I need. (妳是一切我所需要的)

    何不改成 You are my everything (你是我的一切)

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