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拜託,幫我看看這樣的自傳文法對不對,非常緊急~

I would like to ask you to consider my qualification for the position in that CJCU college of Management PHD program.

I graduated from the College of Business and Management in June of 2006. Since that time I have been working at my family own company and taking the master courses at the same time in TAinan kun shan university till now.

For the last few years I was studied in University at night and I am working inmy family company as a machine operator and now I am handling the qc inspection job . After university I would like to prompt myself for more further study in master. My project in Master has been almost done and I would like to make my self new goal for study in Management PHD program.

My family got business in different country and my two brothers are located in Malaysia and my family hope that I can make further study for upgrading our own or expending our business in the future .

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  • chen
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    1 0 年前
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    I would like to ask you to consider my qualification for the position in

    . that CJCU college of Management PHD program.

    I graduated from the College of Business and Management in June of 2006. Since that time I have been working at my family own company and

    . taking the master courses at the same time in

    . Tainan kun shan university till now.

    For the last few years I was studied in University at night

    . and I am working in my family company as a machine operator and now

    . I am handling the qc inspection job .

    After university I would like to prompt myself for more further study

    . in master.

    My project in Master has been almost done and I would like to make

    . my self new goal for study in Management PHD program.

    My family got business in different country and my two brothers are located in Malaysia and my family hope that I can make further study for upgrading our own or expending our business in the future .

    文法和用字是非常好

    Is the composition part above whether adding or adjusting like this ?

    I have been working at our own company ....

    For the last few years, I had ever been studied

    . at The Night- University ,. but now,

    . I am working in my family company as a machine operator

    . and handling the quality's inspection job.

    After university I would like to prompt myself knowledge.....

    Our family are engaged in the business ........

    upgrading our own ability or expending our business in the future .

    2010-05-20 21:50:08 補充:

    to prompt myself in the knowledge.

  • 1 0 年前

    I would like to ask you to consider my qualification for the position in that CJCU college of Management PHD program.

    "I would like to apply the study of Management PhD program in CJCU college based on my corrent qualification."

    I graduated from the College of Business and Management in June of 2006. Since that time I have been working at my family own company and taking the master courses at the same time in TAinan kun shan university till now.

    “I graduated from the College of Business and Management in June, 2006. After graduation, I have been working for my family business for XX(請填幾年在自家工作多久) years. Meanwhile, I also have been studying Master program,(請填碩士課程/科系), in Tainan kun shan university.“

    For the last few years I was studied in University at night and I am working inmy family company as a machine operator and now I am handling the qc inspection job . After university I would like to prompt myself for more further study in master. My project in Master has been almost done and I would like to make my self new goal for study in Management PHD program.

    "During Master semesters, I were working in my family business as a machine operator and handling the QC inspection job. Corrently, my study in Master is almost completed. Afterward, I would like to get further study in Management PhD program."

    My family got business in different country and my two brothers are located in Malaysia and my family hope that I can make further study for upgrading our own or expending our business in the future .

    "My family has business in different countries and my two brothers are working as (請填工作單位/position) in Malaysia for XX (幾年) years. In addition, my family hopes that I could make further study in PhD or expend the family business in my generation."

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