Bolton
Lv 4
Bolton 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

一篇自己打的文章,請幫我檢查文法

最近在學習翻譯,請幫我在文法的部份做修正

為了不麻煩大大細心的講解,請直接修改,我再自行探討就好囉!

(1)

The science and technology is getting more and more developed and user-friendly nowadays. The computer is only used for engineering calculation originally. But now it is become a tool for people communicating online. So many people like to gossip and contact by messenger. Furthermore, the messenger is very conveniently because it doesn’t take your money.

(2)

If people have messenger, they mostly like use to contact with friends. This kind of behavior result in people stays indoor everyday. For this reason, the messenger becomes an indispensable tool in people’s daily life.

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    (1)

    Science and technology has developed and is getting more and more user-friendly nowadays. Computer was only used for engineering calculation originally, but now it has become a tool for people to interact online. Many people like to gossip and contact by messenger. Furthermore, the messenger is very convenient because it doesn’t cost you money.

    Nowadays, science and technology has developed and is getting more and more user-friendly. Computer was only used for engineering calculation at the beginning, but it has become an online communication tool for people now. Many people like to gossip and contact with others by messenger. In addition, messenger is very convenient that it doesn’t cost you money.

    (2)

    If people have messenger, they mostly use it to contact with their friends. This kind of behavior results that people are likely to stay inside every day. For this reason, messenger becomes an indispensable tool in people’s daily life.

    People who have messenger usually use it to contact their friends. It ends up with the result that people like to stay inside every day. Hence, messenger has become an essential or necessary tool in people’s everyday life.

    第一段我只改了文法

    第二段我稍稍改了一下

    改了我覺得通順點的

    Hope it's fine!

    參考資料: myself!!~\(≧▽≦)/~!!
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  • 10 年前

    支持小班。

    因為「but」等連接詞最好不要當開頭〈正式文裡〉。

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  • evan
    Lv 7
    10 年前

    The science and technologies are getting more and more developed and user-friendly nowadays. The computer was only used for mechanical calculations originally. But now it has become a tool for those who communicate with people online. So many people like to chat and contact with each other through messenger. Furthermore, the messenger is very convenient because it doesn’t cost you any money.

    If people have messenger, they mostly like to use it to contact with friends or their co-workers. As a result, people stay indoor everyday instead of doing outdoor exercises. Therefore the messenger has become an indispensable tool in people’s daily life.

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