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Two similar restaurant I have been to 尼法 and Wang Steak(王品)

This year , I ate at two very similar restaurants. After I compared the atmosphere , meal and server. I like 尼法 restaurant more than Wang Steak(王品) restaurant.

The first thing I considered was the atmosphere. Both they are beautifuI decoration. But I thought that the 尼法 restaurant is very suitable lover to dine. And尼法 restaurant was quiet and people are talking in undertones. However, the Wang Steak(王品) restaurant was noisy and children uproar.

In addition to atmosphere, I had to pay a lot of attention to the meal. The meal at 尼法 was much more expensive than the meal at 王品. Both they meal are fine. But the food at 尼法 was specially and delicious. Even steak and pumkin soup is famous. And the live show is very unique.

Third, the server made me impressly. Two restaurant server are nice. But the server at 尼法 was much more polite that the server at 王品 restaurant.

Even they pay attention to any details.結帳也是到你面前收取.王品是到櫃台.

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    Two similar restaurants , 尼法 and Wang Steak(王品), which I have been to 尼法 and Wang Steak(王品)

    This year, I ate at two very similar restaurants. After I compared the atmospheres , meals and server services, I like prefer尼法 restaurant more than to Wang Steak(王品) restaurant.

    The first thing I considered was the atmosphere, both they are have beautiful decorations, but I thought that the 尼法 restaurant is was very suitable for lovers to dine, and尼法 restaurant there was quiet and people are were talking in undertones. However Oppositely, the Wang Steak(王品) restaurant was noisy and children were uproarious.

    In addition to atmosphere, I had to pay a lot of attentions to the meal. The meals at of尼法 was were much more expensive than the meals at of 王品. Both they Their meals are fine, but the food at of 尼法 was specially and delicious, even steaks and pumpkin soup is were famous, and the live show is was very unique.

    (“他們雙方” both of them 或 they both)

    (“屬”那家的食品,應用 of) (文章一開始即以過去式表達,內容時態應一致,勿一下過去式,一下又現在式)(文章段落內如仍在敘述同一件事,在這段敘述文字間不可使用句點,應用逗點,句點用於一件事已敘述完,要談另一件事時使用。)

    Third, the server services (一般都指”服務”) made me impressed(此字應使用被動式), two restaurants’servers are were nice, but the server at ones of 尼法 was were much more polite that than the server at the ones of 王品 restaurant.

    Even they The 尼法 paid attention to any details, even paying the bill , they would come to you to deal with, but in 王品, you should go to the counter to do it yourself.

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