曾小強 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫忙看一下我的英文日記吧~~

小朋友巳經有回家作業嘍

今天看著小朋友在寫功課時,看他非常認真的一個字一個字寫著,

心裡就覺得他長大了,(內心在微笑)

而且啊,他寫字的時候還真是安靜呢^ ^(一般時他可是吵死了)

My kid has already homework.

Today, I see him who he seriously wrote the words one by one.

I think my son has grew up gradually in my heart.(I have a bit simle...)

And....when he wrote at this time, I feel its so quiet and cute~~(everyday he has always noisily)

請幫忙看一下翻譯,請指教,謝謝

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請問一下

什麼叫woven children啊?

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您第2句的文法解釋一下好嗎?總覺得怪怪的

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第3及第4都很怪…??!!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My kid had already started to do hishomework.

    Today, I saw him doing his homework. Seeing him doing his homeworks one by one seriously, I felt that my son had gradually grew up.

    And....when he was writting, he was really quiet and cute. ( he is always noisy everyday)

    首先 發生過的事要用過去式

    My kid has already homework沒有動詞

    變成: 我的孩子已經功課

    要加個 do

    .(I have a bit simle...)

    這句實在很怪

    但是我不知道怎麼改...

    第貳句的who用的怪怪的

    grew up gradually 要改成gradually grew up

    副詞要放前面

    at this time不太適當

    因為是寫字時都會很安靜

    所以改成when he was writting比較好

    I feel its so quiet and cute~~

    its意思是 : 他的 語意怪怪的

    everyday he has always noisily

    這句用詞錯誤而且沒有動詞

    變成: 他總是很吵地

    has不是動詞

    noisily adv. 吵鬧地 noisy adj.吵鬧的

    除了文法外

    整體文章架構還不錯

  • 1 0 年前

    Woven children has already started with homework

    Today, when looking at children in homework, watching him very carefully read each word,

    Heart to think he grew up, (heart smiling)

    And ah, he really is a quiet time to write it ^ ^ (usually noisy, but when he died)

    參考資料: google翻譯
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