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幫我改一下英文自傳的文法(20點)謝謝

中文:

綜合以上的一些學經歷,我認為我的個性沈穩細心、負責任、抗壓性強,有足夠的資格成為一個優秀的人才,而「學以致用」是我最大的理想,在大學學歷完成後,我希望可以到業界服務,一方面驗證學校所學,另一方面增強自己的實務經驗,想把學校所學的運用在工作中,我想最實際的方法便是進入職場,因此我希望可以成為貴公司的一份子。我覺得無論是那一種工作,最重要的還是對工作的熱誠及責任感和一顆肯學習的心,因此我若能有幸進入貴公司,必會全力以赴扮演好自己的角色。得知貴公司有招募人才的計劃,希望能給我機會,我相信憑藉著我的好學與熱忱,及不怕苦的毅力,我有十足的自信可以勝任愉快。

英文:

Comprehensive above some learn the career, I think my character am cool-headed with quiet attention, be responsible, the anti- presses sex strong, has the enough qualifications to become an excellent person, and” learning with a view to its application" is my biggest ideal, after university educational background completes, my hoping can go to the industry service, identifying the school on the other hand learn, on the other hand strengthen own actual situation experience, think the school learns of the usage is in the work, I think the most actual method would be into the office, so my hoping can become a member of your company. I feel that working no matter, the most important still to the zeal and responsibility that work with an is willing to learn of heart, so I if can be lucky into your company, will make a concentrated effort to play very own role necessarily. Know your company contain plan of enlisting the talented person, hope to give me the chance, I believe to rely on my learn with the enthusiasm, and the perseverance of the not afraid bitterness, my having the hundred percent self-confidence can be very competent at a job.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    拿去

    Some of the above, I think that my personality steady careful, responsible, strong, have sufficient qualifications to become a good talent, and "learning" is my greatest ideals, in a university degree when you are finished, I hope to be able to authenticate the service industry, on the one hand, and on the other hand, school learned enhance their practical experience, to make use of the school to learn on the job, I think the most practical way is to enter the workplace, so I hope I can become a part of your company. I think no matter what kind of work, the most important thing is to work with enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility and are willing to learn, so I had the pleasure of you, will be fully play their role. Know your company has a plan to recruit talent in the hope of giving me the opportunity, I believe that with my love and passion, and fear of perseverance, I can have full confidence.

  • 1 0 年前

    用翻譯網英文去改翻譯網英文=翻譯網英文.

  • 1 0 年前

    你是用YAHOO翻譯嗎??有點慘不忍睹

    建議你先自己寫過一遍都比翻譯好唷^^

    因為有點不知該從何下筆改~~

    參考資料: 我(英文助教)
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