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幫忙修改文法 20點 (勿用翻譯軟體)

麻煩大家,謝謝。

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There are four people in my family. My father is a vet, he is a little fat. He looks like fearsomely, in fact, he is a nice person. My mother is a teacher, she is thin and a little short. She is benevolent, but strict with her daughters’ morals. My sister is cute, she is eleven years old. She likes my mother. She is considerate of everything. However, she will quarrel with me. I am a junior high school student in xx high school. My specialty is writing, and my hobbies are reading books, listening to foreign music, and watching American TV series. I am an optimist, and I have a positive attitude towards life. R. Emerson said “Write it on your heart that every day is the best of the year.” is my motto.I came from Changhua, and lived in xx township until I was about six years old. Everyone in xx was friendly and diligent, I learned many things from them. Then my family moved to oo township in Changhua. It is a township bigger than xx. When I was seven, I studied in oo elementary school. At the outset, everything was hard, because I didn’t go to a kindergarten before I went to the elementary school. I didn’t have big problems in subjects without Chinese, because I didn’t know phonetic notations. Although I wasn’t good at phonetic notations, I knew many Chinese characters, and I liked to write Chinese characters words, even articles when I was small. Because of that, since the teacher taught Chinese characters, Chinese was not hard for me. Then I took part in many Chinese composition contests and won the prizes. I overcame this difficulty at the beginning. I had good grades in the elementary school. Besides, I often took part in many speech contests and won the prizes. Before I entered the fifth grade, I was a host for the grade talent show, it was a big attempt, and finally I did it! In the summer vaction for the fourth grade to the fifth grade, I went to Japan a month.

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They were a nice family, and I experienced the Japanese regular life in that month, I even went to a temple fair with kimono. Japanese several merits, politeness, optimism and diligence etc. influenced me deeply. Finally, I also learned basic Japanese.

  

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In the sixth grade, I passed xx high school talent class in math successfully. Then I studied in class xxx in the seventh grade. Now, I lived my life effortfully and richly......

文章斷字有點怪怪的...麻煩了

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啊啊..弄錯了

不用翻譯...是修文法

抱歉抱歉=口=

4 個已更新項目:

不是啊...是要改文法..

抱歉=口=

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  • 橘子
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    There are four people in my family.

    My father is a vet, he is a little fat.→My father is a vet,and he is a little fat.

    (或是你要把它拆成兩句也可以)

    He looks like fearsomely.→He looks fearsome

    *因為 looks like後面應該要接名詞,但是我找不到fearsomely這個單字,可能無法幫你確定這個單字是否為名詞,不過也可改成我上面的句子,意思是大致一樣的。

    (look是連綴動詞+原級形容詞)

    in fact, he is a nice person. →In fact, he is a nice person.

    My mother is a teacher, she is thin and a little short. →

    My mother is a teacher, and she is thin and a little short.

    (一樣,也可以把它拆成兩句)

    She is benevolent, but strict with her daughters’ morals.

    (這句我不確定對還是錯耶= =,不過看起來怪怪的.)

    My sister is cute, she is eleven years old. →一樣加and或拆成兩句

    She likes my mother. (正確)

    She is considerate of everything. (正確)

    However, she will quarrel with me.→But, she often quarrel with me.

    I am a junior high school student in xx high school. →in xxjunior high school.

    My specialty is writing, and my hobbies are reading books, listening to foreign music, and watching American TV series. (正確)

    I am an optimist, and I have a positive attitude towards life.(或許正確)

    R. Emerson said “Write it on your heart that every day is the best of the year.” is my motto.→拆成

    R. Emerson said “Write it on your heart that every day is the best of the year.”

    This is my motto.

    I came from Changhua, and lived in xx township until I was about six years old. (正確)

    Everyone in xx was friendly and diligent, I learned many things from them.(拆成兩句)

    Everyone in xx was friendly and diligent.→is

    (這是一個事實,用現在簡單式即可)

    I learned many things from them.(正確)

    Then my family moved to oo township in Changhua. It is a township bigger than xx.(正確)When I was seven, I studied in oo elementary school. (正確)

    其實我同意,第一個意見人說的話。這種修改文法真的最好是找你的英文老師比較好。

    2010-07-16 16:02:07 補充:

    感謝這位發問者,不過我還沒打完耶.....

    參考資料: 我自己
  • 1 0 年前

    我家裡有四個人。我的父親是一名獸醫,他是胖了點。可是他看起來絲毫不馬虎,其實,他是一個不錯的人。我的母親是一位教師,她是一個小薄,短。她是仁慈的,而是嚴格與她女兒的道德。我妹妹很可愛,她是11歲。她喜歡我的媽媽。她是體貼的一切。不過,她將與我吵架。我是一名初中學生在XX高中。我的專長是寫作,我的愛好是看書,聽外國音樂,看美國電視連續劇。我是一個樂觀主義者,我有一個積極的態度看待生命。河愛默生說:“寫在你的心,每一天都是一年中最好的。”是我的座右銘。 <br> <br我是從彰化,住在XX鄉,直到我大約 6歲。每個人都在XX是友好和勤奮,我學到了許多東西從他們。然後我的家搬到了00鄉鎮彰化。這是一個鄉鎮大於二十.當時只有7歲,我研究了00所小學。首先,一切都很難,因為我沒有去幼兒園之前,我去了小學。我沒有大問題沒有中國的科目,因為我不知道注音符號。雖然我不擅長的語音符號,我知道不少漢字,我喜歡寫漢字的話,甚至當我的小文章。由於這個原因,因為老師教漢字,漢語對我來說並不難。然後,我參加了很多比賽,贏得了中國組成的獎品。我克服了這個困難的開頭。 我有好成績的小學。此外,我經常參加演講比賽中,贏得了許多獎項。在我進入五年級,我是一個主機年級才藝表演,這是一個很大的嘗試,最後我做到了!在夏天vaction的四年級學生到五年級,我到日本一個月。 他們是一個很好的家庭,我經歷了日本的定期生活在這個月裡,我什至去了廟會的和服。日本的幾個優點,禮貌,樂觀和勤奮等對我影響深刻。最後,我也學到基本的日語。 在六年級,我通過某某高中數學類人才的成功。然後,我在課堂上學習的XXX 7年級。現在,我住我的生命effortfully富饒 ......

    參考資料: 加了一些些字
  • Louis
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    My father is a vet, he is a little fat. He looks like fearsomely, in fact, he is a nice person. My mother is a teacher, she is thin and a little short... My sister is cute, she is eleven years old.這些句子都是兩個沒有對等或從屬關係的子句,需要連接詞,才能將語法錯誤更正.

    在知識家上回答有字數限制,不適合修改作文,因為作文會有句法,結構,推理等問題.你需要找自己的英文老師用討論的.

  • 我的家庭中有四個人。 我的父親是一個獸醫,他是一些脂肪。 他嚇人地看起來像,事實上,他是一個好的人。 我的母親是一位老師,她是瘦的和小短。 她是慈善的,但是嚴厲的與她女兒的道德。 我的姊妹很可愛,她十一歲。 她喜歡我的母親。 她每件事物是體貼的。 然而,她將和我吵架。 我在 xx 高中中是一位中學學生。 我的專門正在寫,而且我的嗜好是看書,listeni

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