昱宏 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看看這篇英文文章有錯字嗎?

Today is August 11, I and my friends and hang out.

About the day we went to the Longshan Temple MRT station and then mansion.

We did 10 minutes, finally reached the mansion of the water Wukong.

We go in for a good swimsuit.

Immediately went to the pool to enjoy the thrill of ice-cold, then I have to keep up with classmates.

So play to 5:00 p.m., comes to an end we will do the MRT to go home after the end of the day While this good

今天是八月十一號,我和我的好朋友一起出去玩.

當天我們約在龍山寺捷運站再一起去公館.

我們做了10分鐘的車, 終於到達公館的水悟空.

我們一進去就換好泳衣.

馬上跑到泳池享受冰涼的快感,隨後我同學也跟上.

就這樣玩到下午五點,玩完後我們就做捷運回家結束這枚好的一天

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Today is August 11, I hanged out with my friends. (my friend and I hang out.)

    About the day We went to the Longshan Temple MRT station to meet each other and then went to Mansion.

    It took We did 10 minutes, finally reached the Water Wukong of Mansion.

    We went in for a good swimsuit.

    Immediately, we went to the swimming pool to enjoy the thrill of ice-cold then I have to keep up with followed by my classmates.

    We played until 5:00 p.m. comes to an end Finally, we took the MRT to go home and had a wonderful ending of the day. 今天是八月十一號,我和我的好朋友一起出去玩.Today is August 11, I hanged out with my friends.

    當天我們約在龍山寺捷運站再一起去公館.We met each other at the Longshan Temple MRT station then went to Mansion.

    我們做了10分鐘的車, 終於到達公館的水悟空.It took 10 minutes, and finally arrived the Water Wukong of Mansion.

    我們一進去就換好泳衣.We went in and changed a good swimsuit.

    馬上跑到泳池享受冰涼的快感,隨後我同學也跟上. We ran into the swimming pool immediately and enjoyed the thrill of ice-cold then followed by my classmates.

    就這樣玩到下午五點,玩完後我們就做捷運回家結束這美好的一天We played until 5 o’clock p.m. then took the MRT home and had a wonderful ending of the day.

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  • 1 0 年前

    基本上, 這根本不叫英文. 看起來很像是用翻譯工具直接從中文翻譯的. 沒法挑錯字, 只能整篇重寫.

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