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喬喬 發問時間: 藝術與人文詩詞與文學 · 10 年前

請改ㄧ改我的英文心得報告(本身應文非常爛)

Oliver Twist

This story descrides an orphan's pitiful bitter experience. He struggled depending on himself to go on living diligently found the family member finally. I thought that I am very happy. Has family member's protecting to be possible to live with the fixed quarter. Looked this story,I obtain an enlightenment. The personhood wants to be grateful,and must grasp the time which is together with the parents. The filial parents only will then not stay well behind regretted.

孤雛淚

這個故事描述一個孤兒可憐的遭遇,他靠自己努力奮鬥的活下去,最終找到家人,我認為自己很幸福,有家人的呵護和固定的處所可以住,看完這篇故事,我得到一個啟示,做人要惜福,並且把握與父母相處的時間,好好的孝順父母,才不會留下遺憾

這是我的心得報告...

請大家給英文很爛的我批改一下...

不好意思了..

已更新項目:

This story describes an orphan's pitiful bitter experience, he going

on living which struggles diligently depending on oneself, found

the family member finally, I thought that I am very happy, have

family member's protecting to be possible to live with the fixed

quarter,

2 個已更新項目:

looked this story, I obtain an enlightenment, is the human

to be grateful, and grasps the time which is together with the

parents, the filial parents well, will only then not stay behind

regretted.

這是修改過的....

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  • 青蛙
    Lv 4
    10 年前
    最佳解答

    Looked this story應用Looking

    英文字不可拆開

    2010-09-20 16:48:46 補充:

    very happy. very最好不要

    2010-09-21 18:04:07 補充:

    time which is together with the parents

    時間和父母在一起?

    2010-09-21 18:04:58 補充:

    only will then not stay well behind regretted.

    看不懂

    2010-09-21 19:51:20 補充:

    有些現在式最好改為過去式

    2010-09-22 13:45:10 補充:

    Has family member's protecting to be possible to live with the fixed quarter

    太中式英文

    2010-09-26 12:24:02 補充:

    This story describes an orphan's pitiful bitter experience, he going

    on living which struggles diligently depending on oneself, found

    用的是分詞構句嗎

    若是你用錯了

    he goingon living which struggles

    問題太多 重寫吧

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