My parents do business in a small way at market. When I was a child, my parents used to teach me that I have to try my best to do everything. Therefore, I had a good attitude toward my life.
I graduated form Department of Applied Foreign Languages. When I was at college, I used to learn foreign languages at the languages corner which is setting up from the school. The listening and speaking skills are my profession. Except for English, I have learned Japanese more than one year. Besides, I also had a part-time job in Creative Arts class, and my job was cleaning the musical instruments and mopping the floors.
I studied in Department of Commercial Management when I was a senior high, and I major in Accounting. I had passed the Examination of level C technician for accounting.
My target is to increase the practical experience for me. If I have the opportunity to get the job, I will do my best for company.
- 非天使Lv 79 年前最佳解答
My parents do a small business in a small way at market, When I was a child, my parents used to and they always teach taught me that I have to try my best to do everything when I was a child, Therefore, I had have possessed a good attitude toward my life since then. (將 when I was a child移至句後，讓my parents do a small business 與後句連結，否則語意感覺是一句一句獨立的，對作文而言並不佳)(I had a good attitude…… , 如此的陳述並不合適，因那態度從小到現在都存在著，使用過去式不正確，至少都須使用現在式，但為表達出其從以前至目前都存在，而改使用句型 have pp………since then 由那時起就已經…….)
I graduated from Department of Applied Foreign Languages. When I was studying at college, I used to learn foreign languages at the languages corner which where(地點用where) is was setting up from by the school. The listening and speaking skills are my professions. Except for English, I have been(have been pp 表”曾經做某事”) learned Japanese for(表期間 for + 期間)more than one year. Besides, I also had a part-time jobin a creative arts class, and my jobwas cleaning the musical instruments and mopping the floors.
When I was a senior high student, I studied in Department of Commercial Management when I was a senior high, and I (前有I 字，此處 and I 可省略，以使文字簡潔 ，majored 前有逗點)majored in accounting, and I had passed the examination of level c technician for accounting.(前段講述大學求學情形，此段講高校，將when I was a senior high student 提至此段最前，以和前段之文意分開，讓讀者讀此段時，馬上可知道是談論何時期之事)
My targetis to increase the practical experiences for me. If I have the opportunity to get the job, I will do my best for contribute my efforts to (前已提過try my best, 此處改用其它表達文字) company.
- JessieLv 69 年前
My name is AAA. I graduated from Department of Applied Languages.
I am good at Egnlish speaking and listening. Except Egnlish I have been
in the Japanese learning programe for about a year.Also, I used to keep a
part time job in Creative Arts class. I cleaned the instruments and kept
things in order. When I was in high school, I studied Accounting in Department of Commercial Management. I passed the level C examination. Therefore,
I am a certified Accounting Technician ( Book Keeper....I don't know what
kind of certificate u got...so maybe you should
say" certificate accounting book keeper).
My parents run the samll busines in the market. They taught me that I have to
try my best at what I do. I have borne this on my mind ever since I was a child.
Now all I need is an opportunity. Then, I will be able to present you the best of
I HOPE THIS WILL WORK FOR YOU. I would recommend you to prepare a
cover letter and a formal resume. If you have resume, u can send it over. I can
help you with resume critique.
Normally, you have to furnish your words a little bit. The plain text presentation
is not really eye catching. Plus, your school projects or extra curriculum can
give you a boost in resume,too. For sure you have to learn how to puzzle
out things and put them in order.
- 9 年前
你可以試試看這個免費的英文軟體，它會幫你抓出英文造句的錯誤：參考資料： big learner