- 9 年前最佳解答
Hahaha, good job.
You already answered yourself. Well, just kidding.
Outline: A,B,C,D, and E each represents a paragraph.
A. My friend is like an idol to me
B. My friend is helpfull to others
C. My friend is full of compassion
D. My friend is generous to all
E. My friend is my idol since he is helpfull, compassionate, and generous.
This outline should do you good in the next week in your class. Make sure you have a good "TOPIC SENTENCE" and at least 3 supporting sentences in each paragraph. Each paragraph should at least have 4 to 5 sentences. Every paragraph should have one good topic sentence. In paragraph E, you simply rephrase all the topic sentences from A to D paragraphs. The outline D sentence could be used as an example of your concluding sentence in the last paragraph.
Remember, as long as your ESSAY is properly structured and your paragraphs and sentences are adequately illustrated then your essay is near safe to pass.
FYI: My Englsih sucks big time but I do know how to structure a good essay. hahaha.
2010-09-30 22:13:50 補充：
Update: I just got email from 瑄瑄. 瑄瑄 asks me to complete this essay for her not just outlines. Well, I did not reply to 瑄瑄 because it is a waste of my time just to reply her. I guess 瑄瑄 is not really asking for help to learn better English but rather 瑄瑄 is asking people to do her homework for her.
2010-09-30 22:14:16 補充：
Well, to 瑄瑄,
Since this is your own assignment from your teacher and with no doubt I think you should put in more of your time and efforts to do your own part of the work. If you want me to complete your assignment for you then I will firmly answer you this "yeah right! this is non of my business".
2010-09-30 22:15:00 補充：
Why do you think it is so easy for you to post your homework online and there would be a lot of people rushing to do your homework for you? Even if it takes just a little time of mine to complete not just a paragraph but the whole essay, what does it do good for you?參考資料： me, me, me, me