Self-introduction﹝請幫忙修改文法等，唔該﹞
題目：Self-introduction，
請幫忙修改文法等，感謝。
【上台做簡單的自我介紹】
Hello, everyone.
My name is Renee.
I'm from Taipei.
My hobbies are learning Cantonese, Japanese, playing facebook, and watching movies.
And, my idol is Sammi Cheng(鄭秀文). I like her for more than ten years. I went to see her concert at Hong Kong coliseum and Taipei Arena.
When I'm in Hong Kong, I like to take trams, see Victoria view, and eat local food, and more and more.
That's why I love Hong Kong so much.
I am looking forward to going Hong Kong soon.
In addition, my future plan is working in Hong Kong.
Finally, ﹝拿出海報﹞
Have you seen this movie "Totoro" before?
I like this movie which can bring the good old days and memory, when I was child.
Thank you for your listening.
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- HOHOfrillLv 49 年前最佳解答
希望你喜歡我的修改:
Hello, everyone.
My name is Renee.
I'm from Taipei.
I like learning Cantonese and Japanese. I also like facebook and movies.
My favorite artist is Sammi Cheng (鄭秀文). She is my idol. I have been her faithful fan for more than ten years. I have been to her concerts at Hong Kong coliseum and Taipei Arena.
When I'm in Hong Kong, I love to transport by trams. I enjoy the Victoria view, local food, shopping and much more. That's why I love Hong Kong so much.
I look forward to visiting Hong Kong soon. If possible, I would like to work in Hong Kong in future.
Finally, ﹝拿出海報﹞ here is a poster for you to see.
Have you seen this movie before? The name of this movie is "Totoro" .
This is a very good movie which has brought back much memories of those good old days, espeically when I was a child. This is my recommendation to you. I hope you like it.
Thank you for your listening.
2010-09-30 20:06:11 補充：
最後一句, 應該是 Thank you.
2010-10-01 10:34:34 補充：
一個台北人國立大學畢業至香港工搵份工，難嗎?
除非你有特別門路或專長, 能進入跨國大機構, 否則是絕對不容易的. 個人覺得現在比較容易進入的是娛樂事業, 如音樂, 化妝, 電視甚至賭場等. 在香港, 我幾乎覺得已由大陸人雄霸了大部份行業及職位.
參考資料： 自己
