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my hometown 之英文作文修改

My HometownI have lived in Taipei for 20 years. However, in every vacation, I usually go back to Tainan, Yujing, to visit my grandparents. Although I have lived Taipei for a long time, I regarded Yujing, 玉井, as my hometown.I love here not only because of its warm weather and friendly people but also its unpolluted air and tranquility. Specially, a half of mountain in Yuhing, Hu Tou Mountain, 虎頭山, which has Yu Qing Fang monument up there belonged to our family from my grandparents’ generation. Many kinds of fruits were planted in the mountain, such as mango, guava, jujube, and so on. When you take stroll in the orchard, you can absorb the phytoncide and enjoy picking up fruits. When I retire , I want to move back and take it easy for the rest of my life.

希望大大們可以幫我修改錯誤

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There is a famous monument for Yu Qing Fang.

這句我改成這樣

余清芳紀念碑是在虎頭山上 並不是地名

There is a famous monument at Yu Qing Fang.

這樣寫好像變成地名

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I love Yu-Jing not only because the weather is warm and people are friendly but also because there is unpolluted and Yu-Jing is a quiet township.

這句這樣寫不知道ok不ok

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  • 10 年前
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    My Hometown

    I have lived in Taipei for (more than) 20 years. However, every (summer/winter) vacation (When there are consecutive holidays), I usually go back to Yu-Jing, in Tainan County , to visit my grandparents. Although I have lived in Taipei for a long time, I still regard Yu-Jing (玉井) as my hometown.

    I love Yu-Jing not only because it is warm there and people are friendly but also because the air there is unpolluted and clean and Yu-Jing is a quiet township. What is more special, half of the mountain in Yu-Hing is called Hu-Tou-Mountain (虎頭山).There is a famous monument at Yu Qing Fang. All these have belonged to our family and have been passed down from the generation of my grandparents to the present generation. Many kinds of fruit trees are planted in the mountain, such as mango, guava, and jujube. When you take a stroll in the orchard, you can inhale (breathe in) phytoncide and enjoy plucking (picking) fruits. When I retire, I want to move back to Yu-Jing and live a peaceful life there for the rest of my life.

    說明:A. such as表比如,其意只是列舉,不能後加 and so on,and the like,etcB. 有些地方,先生表達的意思,我無法充分了解,如有會錯意改錯了,請就事實更正。

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