關於英文時態問題...20

The robot is unable to run on the slope. On Oct. 1st, i took my new toy, robot, to the mountain and put it on the slope,and it didn't run. However it run normally on flat. After I called the vendors, they havebeen investigating what the materials are replaced will affect the robot to mistake.

請問一篇文章裡時態這樣寫,可以嗎?第一句TOPIC SENTENCE,因為是事實,所以我用現在式。

On Oct. 1st到However it run normally on flat,因為在講10/01我玩得結果,所以我用過去式。

而最後這一句, After I called the vendors, they have been investigating what the materials are replaced will affect the robot to mistake.

我打給廠商,所以我用過去式,而廠商他們已經在調查(還在調查,還沒有結果,所以我用have been investigating )什麼樣的原料被置換將影響機器人的誤判(以後的結果所以用未來試)

請問時態這樣表態,可以嗎?好像不太對。

該如何修正呢?

已更新項目:

Shari 大:

那they have been investigating which materials used will affect the false results of robots’ performances. 用will是ok的?前面都講過去式

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  • Shari
    Lv 6
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    The robot cannot is unable to run on the slope. On Oct. 1st, I took my new toy, robot, to the mountain and put it on the slope, and it didn't run. However it run ran normally on flat. After my call to I called the vendors, they have been investigating which what the materials (used) are replaced will affect the false results of robots’ performance to mistake. cannot 代 is unable to

    I 得大寫

    toy robot 不用前後加逗號, robot 形容 toy

    and it didn’t run 不用 and, 因與前段的主詞不同

    過去式 的 run 是 ran

    After I called the vendors 可改為 After my call to the vendors

    they have been investigating what the materials are replaced will affect the robots to mistake 很中式說法,有點混淆改為直接說法—they have been investigating which materials used will affect the false results of robots’ performances. 他們正在進行偵查什麼原料會導致機械人(玩具) 性能的錯誤之結果

    2010-10-07 22:22:19 補充:

    Will 不一定表示將來, 在此我翻成"會" 有大概、 能、 慣於, 總是等等之意

    它還有其他意義如下:

    (表示單純的將來)將

    (表示意志, 意願)願, 要

    (表示經常性, 習慣性)經常, 慣於, 總是

    (表示能力, 功能)能

    (表示猜測)可能, 大概

    (表示責任, 義務) 必須, 一定

    用意志力使, 主觀促成[O2][+(that)]

    遺贈[O1][(+to)]

    意欲, 決心要

    下決心

    願意

  • 匿名使用者
    5 年前

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  • 9 年前

    "After I called the vendors, they have been investigating what the materials are replaced will affect the robot to mistake. "

    My suggestion,

    After I called the vendor and found out that they had been investigating which material type would cause the robot to err.

    參考資料: Me
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