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曾小強 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

simple introduce myself~~~

The English teacher asked us to have a presentation in two minutes.

The subject of presentation is an introducion by myself.(about anything)

(If I'm in cram school,~~~begin)

Well, at first I'm glad to introduce myself. My name is Jeff. Im' from 中和.

I like to play basketball at my free time ago, but "Now" I probably couldn't play it,because the doctor told me should be avoid exciting exercise.

I remembered that I could hardly stand last time after exercise.

I have couldn't beleve it until nowadays, and Im' only thirty-four of age.

So, I like to watch animation movies, like Toys Story, Sherk,....and so on.

And I like to feast at night market too, becasue there is anything to eat,

I can't think what I need to eat. The night market has some good food,

for example, stinky tofu, chicken fired steak and some drink, they're so delicious.(I love passion fruit,it has a fascinating flavor of sweet and sour)

I work at medical techonlogy company for almost two years , I'm an office staff, I'm in charge of control material.

Fortunately, it's so close distance between my home and the office.

I spent only ten minutes.

please help to check grammar, if you have better sentence, please let me know, thanks.

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In fact, you're both help me a lot.

I don't know how to choose the best answer.

The matter will be decided by vote.

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    Well, at first I'm glad to introduce myself.

    i think it will be better if you say," first of all, i'm glad to have you here and intruduce myself." though there is niothing wrong with your sentence

    My name is Jeff. Im' from 中和.

    I like to play basketball at my free time ago,

    we use"in one's free time", not "at one's free time.

    and we use" time+ago"

    so this sentence should be"I liked to play basketball in my free time before"

    but "Now" I probably couldn't play it,

    i realize, if you say"now", why don;t you just use"can" instead of "could"?

    because the doctor told me should be avoid exciting exercise.

    it should be"because the doctor asked me to avoid exciting exercises"

    because i guess there's not only one exercise you can't do?

    I remembered that I could hardly stand last time after exercise.

    I have couldn't beleve it until nowadays, and Im' only thirty-four of age.

    just use"i couldn't belived it"

    So, I like to watch animation movies, like Toys Story, Sherk,....and so on.

    And I like to feast at night market too, becasue there is anything to eat,

    I can't think what I need to eat.

    i guess what you wanna say is" i can't decide which one should i choose(to eat)"

    The night market has some good food,

    it will be better if you say"there's some good food at the night market"

    for example, stinky tofu, chicken fired steak and some drink,

    drinks

    they're so delicious.(I love passion fruit,it has a fascinating flavor of sweet and sour)

    I work at medical techonlogy company for almost two years , I'm an office staff, I'm in charge of control material.

    Fortunately, it's so close distance between my home and the office.

    "the distance between my home and office is so close"

    I spent only ten minutes.

    "it takes me only ten minutes (to go to work)"

    that's about it, hope it will help you

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  • 老登
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    10 年前

    The English teacher asked us to have a presentation for two minutes.

    The subject of presentation is an introducion by myself.(about anything)

    (If I'm in cram school,~~~begin)

    I'm glad to introduce myself. My name is Jeff. Im' from 中和.

    I like to play basketball in my free time , but "Now" I probably couldn't play it,because the doctor told me that I should avoid exciting exercise.

    I remembered that I could hardly stand last time after exercise.

    I can't beleve it even now , because Im' only thirty-four years old .

    I like to watch animation movies, like Toys Story, Sherk,....and so on.

    And I liketo go to night markets , too, becasue there are always good food to eat , such as stinky tofu, chicken fired steak and some drink, they're so delicious.(I love passion fruit,it has a fascinating flavor of sweet and sour)

    I work in a medical techonlogy company for almost two years , I'm an office staff, I'm in charge of the controling of material.

    Fortunately, it's not far from my house to my office.

    I spend only ten minutes to go to work everyday.

    希望有幫助喔!

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