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請英文高手幫我看我寫的推薦信

這週作業是要寫一封推薦信推薦自己的朋友當學生會長

Dear Sir:

It is a pleasure to recommend to you, a best one friend of mine.

I met Payton Liu while I was roommates with him nevertheless we didn’t realize each other originally, we will live together just because ours numbers order is sequent, however when I get along with him more and more time, my notion of him change completely, he is the most responsible I have ever know, and have high standard with everything certainly include himself, also active attended in public affairs. In the activity I can see he have ability to work independently and sense of responsibility.

I am thus pleased to give my full support and recommendation Payton Liu to be the chairman of the student associate. I believe the student association can be thrived because of he joins, If and further information is required, please feel free to contact me.

Sincerely,

請英文高手改正指教囉!

感謝!

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Sirs:

    It is a pleasure to recommend Payton Liu, to you a best one friend of mine, to you.(要介紹之人名,最好於開頭即表明)

    I We met Payton Liu together while I was a roommates with him, nevertheless we didn’t realize know (兩人開始認識,使用know 較合適,realize 較屬了解、認知的意思,是較深層的)each other originally, we will lived together in the same room just because the order of ours numbers order is sequent, however when after I got along with him more and more for a period of time, my notion of him changed completely, he is the most responsible person I have ever know, and he have always persists high standard with in everything, certainly particularly include in himself, and he also actively attended in public affairs. In the those activities I can see saw and realize he had abilities to work independently and senses of responsibility.(第三人稱應使用has, have是第一人稱I 和第二人稱you 使用)

    I am thus pleased to give my full support and recommendation Payton Liu to be the chairman of the student association. I believe the student association can will be thrived because of his joining, If any further information is required, please feel free to contact me.

    Sincerely,

    2010-10-18 10:03:16 補充:

    對不起

    I can see saw and realize he had abilities

    之realize 漏加d,請加上。

  • Shari
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    我就直接寫了:

    Dear Sirs and/or Madams:

    It’s my great honor to recommend Payton Liu for the Chairman of the Student Associate. Payton Liu is the most responsible person I have ever known, always holding high standards and very active in public affairs. Through the above mentioned activities and being his roommate for a long time, I found numerous good qualities of him such as independent, reliable responsible, enthusiastic, caring, and knowledgeable and so on. Hence, I am highly recommending him to you. He will be the best candidate for the position. Please feel free to contact me for further information. Yours truly,

    2010-10-12 10:41:45 補充:

    在 reliable 後加個逗點

    I found numerous good qualities of him such as independent, reliable, responsible, enthusiastic, caring, and knowledgeable and so on.

  • 1 0 年前

    請英文高手幫我看我寫的推薦信

    這週作業是要寫一封推薦信推薦自己的朋友當學生會長

    Dear Sir:

    It is a pleasure to recommend to you, a best (不用加one因為前面已經有一個"a") friend of mine.

    I met Payton Liu while I was roommates with him(,) nevertheless we didn’t realize each other originally(.) (W)e will live together just because ours numbers order is sequent, however when I get along with him more and more(這裡不用加time), my notion of him change completely(;) he is the most responsible (person) I have ever know(n), and have high standard with everything certainly include himself, (and will) also active attended in public affairs. In the activity I can see he have (the) ability to work independently and (the) sense of responsibility.

    I am thus pleased to give my full support and recommend (不用加dation) Payton Liu to be the chairman of the student associate. I believe the student association can be thrived because of he('s) joins, If and further information is required, please feel free to contact me.

    Sincerely,(Your Name)

    我加上去的都是用括弧寫的.

    我只是幫你修改一些文法的問題, 原來意思沒變.

    2010-10-12 10:59:35 補充:

    對不起最後一句打錯

    he's 旁邊的那個 joins 把它變成 join.

    或者是 because of he joining the student association.

    參考資料: 移民到加拿大的七年級生, 移民到加拿大的七年級生
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