李小滴 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請英文高手幫我檢查一下文章文法!!

Pencil box is something I will carry.(隨身攜帶的英文如有別的翻譯請幫我改一下)

My pencil box is very special that modeling is kind of a doll and it's a cartoon called "Gaspard et Lisa".

The pencil box was very meaninful to me.

The story is, one day I saw a classmate next to me in the class who put a very special pencil box on her table, me and Afra like it very much so I asked her where can I buy it, but she told me the pencil box is out of print that I'm sad to hear it.

Two weeks later, I was shopping on the road with Afra, we saw the same pencil box in the store, so I decided to but two of the exact same one by myself and sent one for Afra.

It's not only a pencil box I like but also means the friendship she and I.

先跟各位高手說聲,謝謝!!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    我覺得你最後提妳跟Afra的友宜很怪

    因為你無章都沒有講你跟Afra得友宜,整篇文章的重點跟conclusion不搭

    總之, here's some corrections for you

    Pencil case is something I always carry with me

    My pencil case is very special; it' is the shape of a cartoon character from "Gaspard et Lisa".

    My pencil case means a lot to me.

    (My pencile case is very meaninful to me 直翻是"我的鉛筆盒對我有很多含意" 這樣翻怪怪的)

    The story behind my pencile case is that one day I saw the classmate sitting next to me put up a really cute pencil case on her desk. My friend Afra and I liked it very much so we asked the girl next to me where we can buy it. Sadly, she responded to us saying that the pencil case was already out of print.

    However, two weeks later, while I was shopping with Afra, we saw the exact same pencil box that we liked in a store. I bought two of that same pencil cases: one for me and the other one for Afra

    My pencil case is not only a mere pencil case, but it is also a mark of the friendship between Afra and I./

    My pencil case not merely means a case that I put pencils in, but it also means the friendship between Afra and I.

    (not only如果後面接名詞 but also後面也一定要接名詞

    not only 如果後面是動詞 but also 後面也一定要是動詞

    not very fluent because of the grammatical errors. But asides form that it's pretty neat.

    參考資料: I grew up in US :)
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