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英文達人幫忙解題 英文自傳

My name is ***,I am graduated from ******. I am 24 year old and I major aircraft machinery in the technology university. The subjects that I have learnt mainly concentrated on machine control knowledge. As our university is stressing and focusing on structure material , aerodynamic, or sensor principle and CAD/ProE drawing and application, therefore I have very firm on knowledge of basic theory on these related subjects. After graduation, I went to ***school training, during which fully learn to practical experience on aircraft maintenance.

I have character that is enthusiastic and implicit; because I have the strong sense outdoing other therefore whenever I do I will put in all effort, by optimistic and positive attitude to achieve my goal. Although there is always setback in life but I will hard to overcome it. Therefore whether in school or in my career it is unavoidable to encounter unpleasant incident. However I will use these unpleasant or even bad experiences to be part of learning experience. Because with these experience, only then could I feel easy when I encounter all challenges in life.

If fortunately enters your firm, relies on my being diligent with zealously, and did not fear the bitter will, I have fully am

self-confident may be fully competent.

1.請問這樣的自傳有錯誤嗎??(文法等等等的)

2.有哪邊再修改會比較好呢??

3.中文翻譯是什麼(不要用翻譯軟體翻的)

麻煩英文頂尖達人幫忙

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  • 楓華
    Lv 5
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear 版大給您參考: My name is ***. I graduated from ******. I am 24 year old. My major is Aircraft Machinery during my course of study. The subjects that I have learnt were mainly concentrated on machine control knowledge. As the university stresses and focuses on structure material, aerodynamic, or sensor principle and CAD/ProE drawing and application, therefore I have adequate knowledge of basic theories on these related subjects. After graduation, I went to ***school for training where I have fully practical experience on aircraft maintenance.

    I am an enthusiastic and implicit person because I have a strong sense of outdoing than others therefore I always put a lot of effort in completing a task. Besides that, optimistic and positive attitude are the qualities I have in achieving my goal. Although there is always a setback in life but I will try my best to overcome it. As it is unavoidable to encounter unpleasant incident in life, I will use these unpleasant or bad experiences as a part of learning experience. Only then I could overcome the circumstances or challenges faced with these experiences.

    If I were given chance to join your firm, I will give my best service to the firm through my zealously diligent and competency in the field.我用紅色幫你區分修改的部分。

    LifeLaw Team

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  • 9 年前

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多自傳翻譯、中英履歷及求職求學相關的文章和相關資料,對你的求職翻譯應該滿有幫助!還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    參考資料: 很實用的求職、翻譯部落格
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  • 9 年前

    我男友之前網路看到網友推ㄉ兩個超棒的求職網站 裡面好像有

    http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!0A7GCd6BBRlGLmsCoX4a...

    他說對找工作有幫助~~~

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