恩賢 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

幫忙改英文演講稿 The First Time I Swam

The First Time I Swam Ladies and gentlemen, my name is Martin. Today, I’m going to tell you my swimming experiences. I started swimming when I was ten years old. I thought swimming was hard because it’s really complicated. But after my classmates and teacher inspired me, I realized that swimming is easy and fun. The first time I swam, the teacher told me: ’Today, We’re going to learn freestyle. The most important thing is to breathe. Don’t forget to use your mouth breathe, not your nose.’ At first, I used my nose to breathe, so I felt really strange. Then, I felt embarrassed when he told me that I was wrong. But after I use my mouth to breathe, I felt really comfortable, and it was easier if I use my mouth to breathe. The second time I swam, I swam well, and my teacher was surprised that I learned freestyle really quickly. Then, he said: ‘Now you can learn backstroke. You can’t sink, or you might choke the water.’ But I always sank. Why did I always sink? The teacher told me:’ Of course, you do the wrong action!’ After he told me, I tried again and again. Finally, I know how to swim backstroke. Although backstroke is easier, I still prefer to swim freestyle because sometimes I still sink into the water! One day, my teacher was sick, so he couldn’t come. I never practice without my teacher, so I felt scarily to swim alone. But I thought:’ If swam well, my teacher will be happy.’ When he was back, he can’t believe that I improved so much! Ladies and gentlemen, practice makes perfect, and there’s nothing impossible in the world. It just depends on you! I’m still swimming today because I like swimming a lot, also my favorite sport. How about Thomas Edison? He was such a hard-working scientist. So just do your best and work hard on everything! Thank you for listening!

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  • 9 年前
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    寫得非常好,小地方您可能疏忽了:

    The most important thing is to breathe. Don’t forget to use your mouth breathe, not your nose.’ At first,

    The most important thing is breathing. Don't forget to use your mouth "to" breath, not your nose.' In the beginning,

    I felt really comfortable, and it was easier if I use my mouth to breathe.

    "It" felt really comfortable, and it was easier when I "used" my mouth to breathe.

    I never practice without my teacher, so I felt scarily to swim alone.

    I never practiced without my teacher, I felt "scared" to swim alone.

    Of course, you do the wrong action!

    Of course, you are doing it wrong!

    he can’t believe that I improved so much!

    he could't believe that I have improved so much.

    時態改一下就可以了

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