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英文文法的一些句子?? 拜託各位幫幫我

1.The festival makes the begining of the Celtic summer.

2.Hundreds of people, locals and tourists, join on the festivities.

3.The annual 'Day of the Horse' drops on 30 March this year.

4.Everyone in the village was in feast mood as the annual celebrations began.

5.This region has a ripe tradition of folk singing and dancing.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    很榮幸能為您服務,若有任何疑慮請寫信給我,小弟自當盡力而為: 版主未附中文,只能由這5句來猜測,幫您修正前後文更通順的句子 1. The festival makes the begining of the Celtic summer.

    The Celtics celebrate the festival for the coming summer.The festival is celebrated by the Celtics for the coming summer.凱爾特人為即將要來臨的夏天,慶祝這個節日。

    2. Hundreds of people, locals and tourists, join on the festivities.

    Hundreds of local people and tourists join the celebrations.數以百計的當地居民和遊客共襄盛舉(參加這些慶祝活動)。 3. The annual 'Day of the Horse' drops on 30 March this year.

    The annual “Horse Day” falls on March 30th this year.The annual “Horse Day” takes place on the 30th of March this year.一年一度的“「馬日」適逢今年3月30日。一年一度的「馬節」舉辦於今年3月30日。à drop不適合用於日期,改用fall (落於) = take place = happen = is held 4. Everyone in the village was in feast mood as the annual celebrations began.

    Everyone in the village feasted their eyes during the annual celebrations.在這一年一度的慶祝活動開始期間,村里的每個人都盡情欣賞、大飽眼福。à feast their eyes盡情欣賞、大飽眼福à本句應放在最後一句 5. This region has a ripe tradition of folk singing and dancing.There are traditional singing and dancing and folk arts in this region.這個地區有傳統歌舞和民俗技藝。à這句不適合用ripeà folk arts 民俗技藝、民間藝術à本句應放在第4句 ~供您參考並請指教~

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    參考資料: English Grammar of Libra
  • 晚風
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    1 0 年前

    天秤座男子的答案正確而洗鍊。+1

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