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Since the industrial revolution during the eighteenth century, the fossil energy currently provides the main source of energy supplying the global. With the fossil energy source gradually depleted, price of crude on the rise. Thus, people pay more and more attention on renewable energy and green energy, for... 顯示更多 Since the industrial revolution during the eighteenth century, the fossil energy currently provides the main source of energy supplying the global. With the fossil energy source gradually depleted, price of crude on the rise. Thus, people pay more and more attention on renewable energy and green energy, for example, solar energy, wind energy, water energy and biomass, etc… Currently, the solar energy was believed to be possessed the developed potential and application value for the one of renewable energy. But, there are still some drawbacks as follow: the install cost of solar panels is high, and the conversion efficiency is still lower. Thus, the solar system usually uses the DC-DC converter for improved regulation capability.
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是否用 solar cell system 會比較恰當
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