佳惠 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

英文:請幫我看看這樣寫文法對不對!!

1.When living in the U.S.,the students from my country might have problems about the weather there. Because of the U.S.snow in winter,and Taiwan doesn't.

2.When living in Taiwan,the biggest problem they might have is ''How to use chopsticks?''

3.First,the language is the most important problem.The Chinese in Taiwan is quite different then it is in China.Second, when it is time for a meal. There have another problem about ''How to use chopsticks?''If both of above is easy for you,the other problems are pretty easy to solve.

4.I will preview the point that teacher said in the class,and speak it out or write it down. When I take a break , I will do some stretch to let my neck fell comfortable.I always go to bed before 11:00 p.m.

5.I'm not chewing gum .the reason why I don't chew gum is because of the flavor of it.Most of gum add mint,and I don't like the taste.When you are chewing gum,the mouth usually open,I think it look horrible,so this is another reason why I don't like to chew gum.

6.After I chewing gum,I will use tissues to cover it and put the trash into garbage can.I think most of people,especially students.They chew gum and spit it out on the road.

請幫忙看一下文法有無錯誤,回答時請貼上錯誤版本在改正確的在下面!!

謝謝~

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不好意思~!

第四句改為:

4.I will review the point that teacher said in the class,and speak it out or write it down. When I take a break , I will do some stretch to let my neck fell comfortable.I always go to bed before 11:00 p.m.

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所以?你補充的意見在哪裡啊?!

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  • 10 年前
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    1. When living in the U.S.,the students from my country might have problems about the weather there. Because of the U.S.snow in winter,and Taiwan doesn't.

    第一部份前半段用分詞構句OK 但是後半段改為下面的較好

    ....................... , the students from my country might have some problems to adapt the climate there.

    Because in the U.S., it snows in winter, but it doesn't in Taiwan.

    第一點.problem後面加上to adapt......表明是適應天氣變化的問題更明確

    第二點.你搞錯weather 和 climate的用法 weather是短時間 例如今天天氣用weather

    但是整個冬天會下雪屬於氣候關係長時間天氣狀態用climate

    第三點because of 是加上名詞用法的片語 不可以加子句 你要加子句用because就好

    第4點 表達相反語氣的句子用but連接

    2.When living in Taiwan,the biggest problem they might have is ''How to use chopsticks?''

    這句話ok

    3.First,the language is the most important problem.The Chinese in Taiwan is quite different then it is in China.Second, when it is time for a meal. There have another problem about ''How to use chopsticks?''If both of above is easy for you,the other problems are pretty easy to solve.

    改為下面句子

    First, the language would be the main problem.

    Mandarin in Taiwan is quite different from that in Mainland China.

    Second, when eating, you would have a hard time to use the chopsticks.

    Suppose the two points would not make you uncomfortable, other things are pretty easy to face./ to deal with./to adapt.

    你的句子純粹中式英文 幾個地方錯誤There 之後要加 is 或 are 表示有...

    If........above+are

    4.I will review the point that teacher said in the class,and speak it out or write it down. When I take a break , I will do some stretch to let my neck fell comfortable.I always go to bed before 11:00 p.m.

    改為..................points......the teacher.................後面你的意思我不太懂 你是要多練習的意思嗎? 多練習可以用 ...and I will practice speaking and writing out of class.

    後一句改為 During the break time, I will stretch my body and relax my neck.

    最後I always....這句OK

    後面我寫在意見 太長了寫不下^^

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