求英文句子翻譯^ ^-如果你太久沒玩這遊戲...

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抱歉，最近我會清理我的朋友名單
如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了，那我會把你刪除，
真的不好意思^ ^"

請問可以寫成下列的句子嗎?
如果不正確請大大指教，謝謝!

Sorry，recently I have been clean my friend list,so....
If U don't play this game so long ,I'll  delete some of you,so sorry again^ ^"

羅莉 · Accepted Answer

抱歉，最近我會清理我的朋友名單
如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了，那我會把你刪除，
真的不好意思^ ^"

由這個敘述來看, 清理動作還沒開始, 是不久之後(soon; shortly)要清理
不可用recently, 因為recently表示過去的時間
樓上幾位都用了recently,可能是疏忽了.

建議如下:

Sorry, I would soon like to start tidying out my friend list, and if you find your 
name deleted due to being long away from this game, I'm very sorry about it. ^ ^"

2010-11-12 17:17:16 補充：
> I recently will clean (prefer to use "amend")  my friend list...

To 回答者001
recently與will clean併用是錯誤的, 可改為shortly/soon, 並置於助動詞與主動詞之間.

2010-11-12 17:20:28 補充：
> recently I'll delete somefriends from my friend list.

回答者005也犯了相同錯誤.

念泰 · Answer

抱歉，最近我會清理我的朋友名單
如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了，那我會把你刪除，
真的不好意思^ ^"

如果已經著手開始進行 不妨用現在完成進行式
Sorry, recently I have been renewing my friend list, so if it has been a long times for you not to show up in this game, please do accept my apology for being expelled.

renew: 更新
show up:出現
expel:除名

匿名使用者 · Answer

抱歉，最近我會整理我的朋友名單如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了，那我會把你刪除，真的不好意思^ ^">> Sorry, recently I’ll delete somefriends from my friend list. So If you haven’t played this game for a longperiod of time, then I’m gonna delete you. So accept my apology again. ^ ^整理我的朋友名單 → tidy up(or out) my friend list → 看起來都是中式英文。→ 只要這樣表達即可：I’ll deletesome friends from my friend list 
～～～～～～～～※參考看看(have fun in learningEnglish)學英文不要怕犯錯，但要常用若有兩字連在一起，請把它分開※

2010-11-12 15:34:42 補充：
如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了:
So If you haven’t played this game for a while, ...
這樣也可

Mike · Answer

你好
如下的句子,你參考一下
Sorry,recently I have been tidy up my friend list,
If you very long this played game,I will delete some of you,so sorry ^^

H. M. C · Answer

Sorry，recently I have been tidy up my friend list,so....
If U don't play this game so long ,I'll delete some of you,so sorry again

Sorry，recently I have been tidying up my friend list,so....
If U don't have not played this game so long for a long time ,I'll must delete some of you,so sorry again

ch655244 · Answer

大大您好
關於您的問題
提供以下說明
供您做參考

中文:
抱歉，最近我會清理我的朋友名單
如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了，那我會把你刪除，
真的不好意思^ ^"

原句英文:
Sorry，recently I have been clean my friend list,so....
If U don't play this game so long ,I'll  delete some of you,so sorry again^ ^"

問題:
文法與句意錯誤

修正
Sorry, I recently will clean (prefer to use "amend")  my friend list. Hence, I will delete some of friends (Since the 1st sentence didn't mention "friends", here, we cannot utilize "you" but "friend")  who have not play this game for a long time (This sentence aims to define "friend").  Please do accept my apology (Prefer not to use "sorry" for double). ^ ^"

希望以上修正
對您有所助益

2010-11-12 12:08:35 補充：
大大您好

問題
文法,時態,與句意錯誤

修正
Sorry, I recently will tidy up  my friend list. Hence, I would delete some of friends who have not play this game for a long time. Please do accept my apology. ^ ^"

注意
應該使用未來式

求英文句子翻譯^ ^-如果你太久沒玩這遊戲...

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