幸福花茶 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

求英文句子翻譯^ ^-如果你太久沒玩這遊戲...

抱歉,最近我會清理我的朋友名單

如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了,那我會把你刪除,

真的不好意思^ ^"

請問可以寫成下列的句子嗎?

如果不正確請大大指教,謝謝!

Sorry,recently I have been clean my friend list,so....

If U don't play this game so long ,I'll delete some of you,so sorry again^ ^"

已更新項目:

應該是整理我的的朋友名單

Sorry,recently I have been tidy up my friend list,so....

If U don't play this game so long ,I'll delete some of you,so sorry again^ ^"

2 個已更新項目:

謝謝各位大大!!!

有些難抉擇,只好票選了^ ^

6 個解答

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    抱歉,最近我會清理我的朋友名單

    如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了,那我會把你刪除,

    真的不好意思^ ^"

    由這個敘述來看, 清理動作還沒開始, 是不久之後(soon; shortly)要清理

    不可用recently, 因為recently表示過去的時間

    樓上幾位都用了recently,可能是疏忽了.

    建議如下:

    Sorry, I would soon like to start tidying out my friend list, and if you find your

    name deleted due to being long away from this game, I'm very sorry about it. ^ ^"

    2010-11-12 17:17:16 補充:

    > I recently will clean (prefer to use "amend") my friend list...

    To 回答者001

    recently與will clean併用是錯誤的, 可改為shortly/soon, 並置於助動詞與主動詞之間.

    2010-11-12 17:20:28 補充:

    > recently I'll delete somefriends from my friend list.

    回答者005也犯了相同錯誤.

    參考資料: 翻譯是可以靈活運用的
  • 念泰
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    抱歉,最近我會清理我的朋友名單

    如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了,那我會把你刪除,

    真的不好意思^ ^"

    如果已經著手開始進行 不妨用現在完成進行式

    Sorry, recently I have been renewing my friend list, so if it has been a long times for you not to show up in this game, please do accept my apology for being expelled.

    renew: 更新

    show up:出現

    expel:除名

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    抱歉,最近我會整理我的朋友名單如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了,那我會把你刪除,真的不好意思^ ^">> Sorry, recently I’ll delete somefriends from my friend list. So If you haven’t played this game for a longperiod of time, then I’m gonna delete you. So accept my apology again. ^ ^整理我的朋友名單 → tidy up(or out) my friend list → 看起來都是中式英文。→ 只要這樣表達即可:I’ll deletesome friends from my friend list

    ~~~~~~~~※參考看看(have fun in learningEnglish)學英文不要怕犯錯,但要常用若有兩字連在一起,請把它分開※

    2010-11-12 15:34:42 補充:

    如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了:

    So If you haven’t played this game for a while, ...

    這樣也可

  • 1 0 年前

    你好

    如下的句子,你參考一下

    Sorry,recently I have been tidy up my friend list,

    If you very long this played game,I will delete some of you,so sorry ^^

    參考資料: 自己
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  • 1 0 年前

    Sorry,recently I have been tidy up my friend list,so....

    If U don't play this game so long ,I'll delete some of you,so sorry again

    Sorry,recently I have been tidying up my friend list,so....

    If U don't have not played this game so long for a long time ,I'll must delete some of you,so sorry again

  • 1 0 年前

    大大您好

    關於您的問題

    提供以下說明

    供您做參考

    中文:

    抱歉,最近我會清理我的朋友名單

    如果你很久沒玩這各遊戲了,那我會把你刪除,

    真的不好意思^ ^"

    原句英文:

    Sorry,recently I have been clean my friend list,so....

    If U don't play this game so long ,I'll delete some of you,so sorry again^ ^"

    問題:

    文法與句意錯誤

    修正

    Sorry, I recently will clean (prefer to use "amend") my friend list. Hence, I will delete some of friends (Since the 1st sentence didn't mention "friends", here, we cannot utilize "you" but "friend") who have not play this game for a long time (This sentence aims to define "friend"). Please do accept my apology (Prefer not to use "sorry" for double). ^ ^"

    希望以上修正

    對您有所助益

    2010-11-12 12:08:35 補充:

    大大您好

    問題

    文法,時態,與句意錯誤

    修正

    Sorry, I recently will tidy up my friend list. Hence, I would delete some of friends who have not play this game for a long time. Please do accept my apology. ^ ^"

    注意

    應該使用未來式

    參考資料: 小小學者,小小翻譯 (引用請附註), 小小學者,小小翻譯 (引用請附註)
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