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幫我看看文法有錯誤嗎?

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How are you? My name is Celia, 26 years old. I come from Nantou. Graduated from tajen university, Professional is in department of hospitality management. Now, I had three year work experience in hot spring hotel of counter reception, work detail include check in 、check out、online reservation and customer complaint etc. Got many work experience. But, Studies not stops. So, Hope company give opportunity to inform me to interview. Thank you!

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  • Paige
    Lv 5
    10 年前
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    Professional is in department of hospitality management.

    (I majored in hospitality management)

    I had three year work experience

    ( I 'have' three year work experience)

    I had three year work experience in hot spring hotel of counter reception, work detail include check in 、check out、online reservation and customer complaint etc.

    ( I worked in hot spring hotel of counter reception for three years, my responsibilities were check in......)

    Got many work experience. But, Studies not stops. So, Hope company give opportunity to inform me to interview. Thank you!

    ( I learned a lot from my work experience. but learning never stops. So hopefully, you can give me an opportunity for an interview).

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  • 10 年前

    How are you? My name is Celia. I am 26 years old . I come from Nantou. Graduating from Tajen university, I majored in hospitality management. Now, I had three-year wook experience in hot spring hotel of counter reception, which included check in 、check out、onli,ne reservation and the customers' complaints, etc. Last but not least, I hope you to give me the opportunity to interview. Thank you!

    Sincerely.....

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  • 10 年前

    下是我的淺見How are you? My name is Celia, 26 years old. I’m from Nantou. I am gtraduated from tajen university, my professional is department of hospitality management. Up to now, I had three years work experiences at hot spring hotel of counter reception. The work detail include check in, check out, online reservation and customer complaint etc. I think I got many experiences in my ex-job. But, There is no limit to knowledge.I really hope you can give me the opportunity.

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