炭水 竹 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

急!!!拜託英文高手幫幫忙,幫我檢查翻譯 謝謝

謝謝進來願意幫我的人,這是我下禮拜要唸的英文講稿,所以並不是書面繳交,我不知道翻譯的對不對所以懇請幫我檢查。

因為很多句子都是從網路上找到而貼上,所以句子感覺都很獨立而不像講稿,我希望講稿能更口語化而且更順暢,我應該怎麼改呢? 拜託幫幫我了,謝謝:)

今天我要介紹的電影是夜訪吸血鬼。

Today the film I am going to talk is “Interview with the vampire”.

這部電影被提名為兩項奧斯卡獎 - 最佳藝術指導 /佈景裝飾,和最佳原創配樂。

The movie was nominated for two Academy Awards - for Best Art Direction/Set Decoration, and for Best Original Score.

電影類型是屬於恐怖、羅曼史、科幻及幻想的。

這部電影是催眠,令人害怕,性感,有趣的倒行逆施

The genre of movie is horror, romance, science and fantasy.

This movie is hypnotic, scary, sexy, perversely funny.

這部電影是由尼爾喬丹指導演出,而他也曾經導演過亂世浮生這部電影。

憑著亂世浮生這部電影獲得奧斯卡最佳原著劇本獎。

This film was directed by Neil Jordan, and he had also directed “The Crying Game”.

He won an Academy Award (Best Original Screenplay) for The Crying Game.

演出演員有湯姆克魯斯,飾演Lestat,是個以殺人為樂的吸血鬼。

Starring Tom Cruise as Lestat, is a vampire which takes delight in killing human beings.

布萊德彼特,飾演Louis,一個不想成為吸血鬼的吸血鬼。跟Lestat不同的是,Louis對於取人性命並沒有太大樂趣,主要以吃小動物來生存。

Brad Pitt as Louis, a vampire who doesn't want to be a vampire.

Unlike Lestat, Louis feels no pleasure in taking human life and mostly feeds on small animals to survive.

克莉絲汀鄧斯特,飾演Claudia。她會在受害者前表現的像個小天使來引誘他們並取他們性命。她想變成女人一樣,卻永遠沒有機會。

Kirsten Dunst as Claudia.

She would appear to her victims as a little angel and lure them to their deaths. She wants to be a grown woman and will never have that chance.

故事是關於一個吸血鬼在訴說他自己的故事,從他如何成為一個吸血鬼,以及他如何到了現代社會。

The story is of a vampire telling his story of how he became a vampire and how he got to the modern day.

吸血鬼路易決定將他的故事,告訴作家丹尼爾馬洛伊,他在1791年24歲時如何成為一個吸血鬼,還有活了200年是什麼樣子。

Vampire Louis has decided to tell his story to writer Daniel Malloy how he became a vampire in 1791 at the age of 24 and what it's been like living for 200 years.

已更新項目:

這是一個我非常喜歡的吸血鬼電影。在電影裡,蒼白的吸血鬼,美麗、優雅和不朽深深吸引我。還有整個場景的設計,華麗的宮廷服裝,加上劇情中若有似無的曖昧關係,都讓我很喜歡。

This is one of my favorite vampire movies. In the movie, I am attraction to the vampire is pale, beautiful, elegant and immortal.

● 這一段的文法超怪,尤其是深深吸引這邊我不知道該怎麼翻。 而且後面部分我並沒有翻出來,請幫幫我。

2 個已更新項目:

The best way to describe INTERVIEW WITH THE VAMPIRE is to say that the film is like a dark, rich tapestry that becomes more beautiful the longer you look at it.

● 這一段是我在網路上找的,可不可以幫我翻譯一下,我想知道意思謝謝。

真的很長,可是拜託幫幫我,謝謝你們:)

3 個已更新項目:

Joy 謝謝你,真的是幫了我一個大忙^0^

我可以再請教一個問題嗎,

就是我在PPT上介紹主角的個性時,

(PPT上有打主角名字Louis 然後空兩行就打了下面那一句)

我是直接打cynical and desperate, and longed for the release of death.

這樣子是不是不正確? 因為沒有主詞

而且有2個and這樣可以嗎?

麻煩你在幫我解答了,真的很謝謝你:)

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  • Joy
    Lv 6
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    The movie was nominated for two Academy Awards – which are for the Best Art Direction/Set Decoration, and for the Best Original Score.

    The genre of movie is horror, romance, science and fantasy.(It’s a horror, romantic, scientific and fantastic kind of movie.)This movie is hypnotic, scary, sexy, and perversely funny.This film was directed by Neil Jordan, and he had also directed “The Crying Game”.

    He won an Academy Award of the Best Original Screenplay for the movie of The Crying Game.

    One of the heroes in this movie is Tom Cruise, play as Lestat, is a vampire which takes delight in killing human beings.

    Brad Pitt as Louis, a vampire who doesn't want to be a vampire.

    Unlike Lestat, Louis feels no pleasure in taking human life and mostly feeds self on small animals to survive.

    Kirsten Dunst as Claudia.

    She would appear to her victims as a little angel and lure them to their deaths. She wants to be a grown woman and will never have that chance.

    The story is of a vampire telling his story of how he became a vampire and how he got to the modern day.

    Vampire Louis has decided to tell his story to the writer Daniel Malloy how he became a vampire in 1791 at the age of 24 and what it's been like living for 200 years.

    This is one of my favorite vampire movies. I was deeply attracted by those pale, beautiful, elegant and immortal vampires. Beside those characters, I also love the stage setting, luxurious imperial costume and as well as the ambiguous vague relation existed in the plot.

    The best way to describe this movie of INTERVIEW WITH THE VAMPIRE is that the film is like a dark, rich tapestry that becomes more beautiful the longer you look at it.

    描述這部電影最好的說法就是:它像一個深色華麗掛在壁上的錦織,越久越耐看

    2010-11-21 17:01:24 補充:

    主角在電影中通常用hero來代替,女主角則是heroine,你也可以說main character, 但hero,heroine比較專業

    2010-11-21 23:47:34 補充:

    你也許可以把它變成:

    Louis is a peculiar person who is cynical, desperate, and longed for the release of death.

    這是一整句完整的話

    但如果你是用PPT顯示介紹大綱

    妳可以用:

    Louis's personality;

    Cynical, desperate, and longed for the release of death.

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