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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

20++幫我改一下英文看哪裡友錯謝謝

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!k59SqjyTHAOEs0Ohh7rJ...

是否文法有錯或是如何修改會更順暢

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  • 1 0 年前
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