Kddk Kddk 發問時間: 教育與參考考試 · 10 年前

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    This report is about a new product called "Playbook" by Reserach in Motion, a Canadian company, best known for its superior mobile phone 'BlackBerry' for many years. Now Research in Motion wants to compete with Apple's new product 'iPad'. Although nearly six million iPads have been sold in six months after its release, the Canadian company challenges to take a market share. Playbook has a smaller and brighter apperance. (我猜是比較亮,所以用brighter. lighter 是比較輕) Moreover, it can run Flash, the most popular software for online videos. What's more, it offers completely different windows to the user. (上面這句意思不很清楚 -- 是和 iPad 完全不同款式的視窗嗎?)

    Although the company has not started selling Playbook, I expect to get hold of this state-of-the-art device next year. (state-of-the-art = 超先進的 -- 多用來形容科技尖端產品)

  • sorry!我不太清楚

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