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23 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

這封英文情書合格嗎??(10點)

在網路看到這篇文章,小弟單字背過一些,但完全不背文法

大致懂意思,但不知道文法上合不合格,想用來送給異性朋友卻怕出糗,麻煩大大告知ㄧ下,這封情書OK嗎??如果有錯 如何修改??

Am grateful to God that I met you

Whether we can be together or not in the future

At least, have your day; I was very happy

Although not a long time to get together

However, I am very satisfied

Your existence, let me become very excited

Your existence,let me become shy

This is the real me!

My shy,my pure innocence,my romance

Are not escape your eyes!

Only hope that you can listen to my heart

Thank you,my God!

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  • 10 年前
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    在網路看到這篇文章,小弟單字背過一些,但完全不背文法

    大致懂意思,但不知道文法上合不合格,想用來送給異性朋友卻怕出糗,麻煩大大告知ㄧ下,這封情書OK嗎??如果有錯 如何修改??

    Answer:

    I am grateful to God that I met you.

    Whether we can be together or not in the future,

    (at least/to tell the truth) with you these days; I am very happy now.

    Although we can not get together long,

    I am very much satisfied ( in the depth of my heart now).

    Your existence makes me feel very much excited.

    Your existence also makes (lets) me (feel) become shy.

    This is the real me!

    My shyness, pureness, innocence, and romance

    can not escape your eyes!

    I only hope that you can listen to my heart (beat)!

    Thank you, my God!

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