這封英文情書合格嗎??(10點)

在網路看到這篇文章,小弟單字背過一些,但完全不背文法 大致懂意思,但不知道文法上合不合格,想用來送給異性朋友卻怕出糗,麻煩大大告知ㄧ下,這封情書OK嗎??如果有錯 如何修改?? Am grateful to God that I met you Whether we can be together or not in the future At least, have your day; I was very happy Although not a long time to get together However, I am very satisfied Your existence, let me... 顯示更多 在網路看到這篇文章,小弟單字背過一些,但完全不背文法
大致懂意思,但不知道文法上合不合格,想用來送給異性朋友卻怕出糗,麻煩大大告知ㄧ下,這封情書OK嗎??如果有錯 如何修改??


Am grateful to God that I met you

Whether we can be together or not in the future

At least, have your day; I was very happy

Although not a long time to get together

However, I am very satisfied

Your existence, let me become very excited

Your existence,let me become shy

This is the real me!

My shy,my pure innocence,my romance

Are not escape your eyes!

Only hope that you can listen to my heart



Thank you,my God!
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