? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

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With the N + of sth., S+V

It was impossible to take a shower every day because there was a water shortage.

=> With the shortage of water, it was impossible to take a shower every day.

Emma finished her science project because her mother encouraged her.

=>With the courage of her mother,Emma finished her science project.

The production team was left without a job when the boss terminated the contract.

=>With the termination of the contract,the production team was left without a job.

...,including/such as +N

For example/instance,...

The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries.They can be from Ethiopia or Ecuador.

=>The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries,including the Ethiopia ,the Ecuador.

=>The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries.For example, they are from Ethiopia , and Ecuador.

A teacher teaches students many things.A teachers teaches academic subjects.A teachers teaches manners.

=>A teacher teaches students many things, including the academic subjects,the manners.

=>A teacher teaches students many things.For example a teachers teaches the academic subjects,and the manners.

------------adding more information---------------------

A good parent needs to have certain characterisics. The parent needs to be patient.The parent needs to be responsible.

=> A good parent not only needs to have certain characterisics but also needs to be patient and responsilbe.

Taking the bus saves us money.Taking the bus helps reduce air pollution.

=>Taking the bus not only saves us money but also helps reduce air pollution.

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    With the N + of sth., S+V

    It was impossible to take a shower every day because there was a water shortage.

    => With the shortage of water, it was impossible to take a shower every day. OK

    Emma finished her science project because her mother encouraged her.

    =>With the courage of her mother,Emma finished her science project. OK

    The production team was left without a job when the boss terminated the contract.

    =>With the termination of the contract,the production team was left without a job. OK

    ...,including/such as +N

    For example/instance,...

    The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries.They can be from Ethiopia or Ecuador.

    The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries, including Ethiopia and Ecuador. 刪冠詞,加連接詞。

    The actress wants to adopt children from poor countries, for example, countries such as Ethiopia and Ecuador. 附屬的資訊可放在同一句之內。

    The actress wants to adopt children from poor coutnries. For example, she wants to adopt children from Ethiopia and Ecuador.

    A teacher teaches students many things.A teachers teaches academic subjects.A teachers teaches manners.

    A teacher teaches students many things, including academic subjects and manners. 刪冠詞,加連接詞。

    A teacher teaches students many things. For example, he or she teaches academic subjects and manners.

    A good parent needs to have certain characterisics. The parent needs to be patient.The parent needs to be responsible.

    A good parent needs to have certain characteristics. For example, he or she needs not only to be patient but also to be responsible.

    因為to be patient和to be responsible都是屬於certain characteristics的一種,所以不能寫成對稱的關係。

    Taking the bus saves us money.Taking the bus helps reduce air pollution.

    =>Taking the bus not only saves us money but also helps reduce air pollution.

    OK

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