小練 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

可以幫我改一下這篇文章的文法嗎?

我們這組是第二組,我們做的專題題目是「字根字首字尾簡易分析與分類」,很感謝XX技術學院這四年來對我們的栽培,讓我們有那麼好的學習環境,和那麼好的資源設備可以使用,讓我們能在學校充分利用課餘時間到圖書館查找做專題所需要的書籍和資料,不需要大老遠跑到其他地方去找資料,這樣可以節省很多找資料的時間,並且把省下來的時間拿來討論專題,讓我們的專題能夠有充足的資料和完整的編排,最後呈現出最好的專題,感謝學校提供的設備和場地的幫忙。

We are the group number 2, the special topic of our report is about prefix, root and suffix simple analyze and classification-suitable for high school student, so appreciate to XX of Technology these four years to our cultivation, give us a wonderful environment to study and excellence facilities for us to use, let us can adequately to use after school time, go to the library and search some books or the data to make our special topic report, we didn’t need to go other places to find the books or data to do our special topic report, we can save a lot of time to find the data, and we can use the time to do a seminar, to make our special topic report have enough data and complete formation. Finally, display our best special topic report, appreciate to school for provide facilities and place for us.

可以幫我改一下文法嗎?謝謝!!

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  • 10 年前
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    我們這組是第二組,我們做的專題題目是「字根字首字尾簡易分析與分類」,很感謝XX技術學院這四年來對我們的栽培,讓我們有那麼好的學習環境,和那麼好的資源設備可以使用,讓我們能在學校充分利用課餘時間到圖書館查找做專題所需要的書籍和資料,不需要大老遠跑到其他地方去找資料,這樣可以節省很多找資料的時間,並且把省下來的時間拿來討論專題,讓我們的專題能夠有充足的資料和完整的編排,最後呈現出最好的專題,感謝學校提供的設備和場地的幫忙。We are the second group number 2, and the special topic of our report is about prefix, root and suffix simple concise analysis and classification which are suitable for high school students, so we deeply appreciate the four years cultivation of us, which did by to our school, XX of Technology Institute, these four years to our cultivation, the school gave us a wonderful environment to study and offered excellent facilities for us to our using, let us could get all the materials that the report making needed from school library in our time after school without going outside. adequately to use after school time, go to the library and search some books or the data to make our special topic report, we didn’t need to go other places to find the books or data to do our special topic report, for that, we can save a lot of had enough time to discuss the details of find the data, and we can use the time to do a seminar, to make our special the topical report to make it has enough data sufficient contents and complete formation. And finally, we were able to display our the best special topical report, we honestly appreciate to the school for providing facilities and place for us.1.”專題報告”其實就是設有”主題”的報告,就像”專題演講”,只是對某主題進行演講,”special”指特定,而任何研究報告都是針對一主題,不會漫無目標, 因此應只以 topical 一字就己表達出來,不過寫special topic “特定主題”或”特別主題”應亦正確。2.”對某人某物之栽培”,如”對花之栽培” 寫法是 the cultivation of flower, 非 the cultivation to flower, 因此我做了修正。

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